The story is a little confusing, there is a lot going on here, and it was pretty hard to follow, but I think I started to get the jist of it. Wasn't really sure what to do after fighting the Minotaur though, dunno if it ended there? I went back to buy food to give to the Nun and had those "dreams" with Mage, but I couldn't give any food to the Nun :(
Anyways, I can tell you have a grand story to tell, I think the presentation just needs to be polished a bit to make things more clear - maybe slow things down a bit, build up the characters a bit before introducing new stuff. Good job though, keep up the good work!

I find it a little hard to follow sometimes. Too many people involved in the conversations.