Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• 41/80

  A nice quick story to read. Unfortunately, the graphics aren't as good as they could be. The text is just very small and it makes it hard to read, especially with the coloration. On the other hand, the color and style work well for the purpose of setting up the mood outside of making text hard to read.

  Unfortunately, like the concept of the game, the game is relatively easy to forget. The game has some issues that really prevent it from shining. The game could benefit from having a stronger story by letting things develop more could help as well as improving the readability of the text.

• I wasn’t quite sure what to make of this. The premise reminds me of the movie Forget Me Not, but the story ends so suddenly that I felt like a lot of potential was lost. The graphical style was very interesting, almost like an old Apple IIE computer, and seemed to synch with the story’s feel in a way that’s hard to describe. Navigating the environments felt a little tricky, sometimes it was hard to figure out exactly where to step in relation to what you were looking to interact with. In the end, I wish I had seen more so I would have a better idea of what kind of theme the game was really going for.

  Score: 38/80