Even though the game is incomplete at the moment, I really liked the setup of the story of Shiori reliving your memories with you. The writing (and all the jokes) did get a chuckle out of me consistently. I'm interested to see where you go with this story if you decide to continue with it :D

(plus I was crying when I found out that this is where that "KANO!!!!!!!!!" slime came from LMAO)

I enjoyed the writing even though the game is incomplete.

Shiori's dialogues are very in character and I could actually hear her saying her lines. Good job!

I'm looking forward to the finished story!

Incomplete sure but it's built on what looks like a really solid foundation with clear paths to update which can't be underestimated. Nailed the Shiori dialog, could so clearly hear her voice in my head

Although parts of this felt rather... ᵗᵃʳᵍᵉᵗᵉᵈ... I think this was a surprisingly remarkable showcase of your writing skills! Had me laughing every step of the way with John Hololive, our main faceless protagonist, junting their way into a forbidden corner of the universe to be trolled on by a dangerous face in a crystal and an extraordinarily sassy rock.

Following along with her shenanigans leads John to share memories with the gothic girl crystal and rediscover many exciting times in their life, such as their childhood; a memorable uh, moment in history; a very forgettable time at uni, and the infinite grind of working for a paycheck that contributes to the endless cycle of capitalism! There may not be much in the way of RPG elements in this light prototype, nor further worldbuilding beyond what the archiver can cook up for us, but I think you should put those writing skills to use. Thank you for submitting! ᵃⁿᵈ ᵐᵃᵏᶦⁿᵍ ᶠᵘⁿ ᵒᶠ ᵐᵉ ᵗᵉʰᵉᵖᵉʳᵒ 🙇‍♂️

Yoo the writing's really fun. Good job getting this game out in that last 4 hours(according to kanos) fam. Full respect.

Despite being incomplete and short, that game still was so fun to go through xD no real gameplay yet but the humour is just on point and i respect your decision to include many of these jokes for that XD