Good for a prototype, but definitely needs a lot more time and care to make the gameplay feel good. Love the aesthetics and world even if it's small, I can see where the direction is going and it could be a really nice and fun story adventure once completed. A larger team size but still maybe a bit too over-scoped but hey it's ambitious and a good starting point for something bigger. The cat's rear was a bit unnecessary to model, it's a little weird how prominent it is especially with the placement of the camera haha but other than that good effort.
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Reborn : a Pangur Ban's story's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Music & Sound | #6 | 3.897 | 4.500 |
Art / Aesthetic | #15 | 3.464 | 4.000 |
Overall | #16 | 2.656 | 3.067 |
Ready to Release for Money! | #17 | 1.876 | 2.167 |
Can't Wait For The DLC / Sequel | #23 | 2.165 | 2.500 |
Gameplay / Fun Factor | #26 | 1.876 | 2.167 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous.
- This is an extremely pretty game, in both the art and the storytelling. The voice acting is great, and it really felt like I was playing a poem. The main thing I think you should focus on before release is making the climbing a little smoother - right now, it's a little hard to jump while climbing, so one of the pages inside the room is tricky to get to. That said, I really enjoyed playing, and I would love to see this game released! :)
Concept Jam Submission Link
https://itch.io/jam/greenlight-concept-jam/rate/2132992
Prototype Jam Submission Link
https://itch.io/jam/greenlight-prototype-jam/rate/2132992
Production Jam Submission Link
https://itch.io/jam/greenlight-production-jam/rate/2132992
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