It's a very interesting story, tough I had trouble making sense of it.

For some reason the game won't accept my name entry, and it crashed during the office job part.

A pretty surreal experience, that's all I could say without spoiling too much about the visual novel. There are plenty of typos here and there but I didn't have too much of a problem with that.

I feel like the addition of some soundtracks would help with the atmosphere of this game greatly. 

All in all, it's a neat little story.