A winner!

I liked the story I told through this game so much!

I really like that the series of tables provides a kind of spine for the story -- not quite a narrative, but prompting towards different readings or points of view of the damage and repair. Just the sequence of ideas makes a great guide for the player without needing any further layers of mechanics.

Let me know if you'd like more notes! And let me know how you'd like to receive your cup of coffee.

I love it!!!