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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| SUBSTANCE | #13 | 3.917 | 3.917 |
| Overall | #15 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| STYLE | #18 | 3.083 | 3.083 |
Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Short and easy to ready, the submarine map does a great job of conveying setting while being a very functional navigational aid. Love the setting and the rising blood mechanic is a really clever way to increase tension and make things more desperate as the scenario proceeds. While it could use a bit more visual flair, it's a testament to the writing and mechanics that it manages to be so evocative with a relatively sparse layout.
Short, sweet, simple, effective, creative!
Although I'd like to see a longer and more fleshed out version, this is great!
A short and concise mission. Love the use of the flooding submarine trope with a cult-injected twist. The use of blood is evocative and I love the idea that the more you kill cultists the more it floods. I'd love to see a version of this mission that's maybe page longer with a tracking tool or chart for referees to keep track of the blood level on the submarine easier and maybe some key art thrown in but as it stands I think this is a great example of how a FIST mission should be written.
Really useful feedback, thank you!
I agree that it could be longer, and a lot prettier. I wanted to do room descriptions and more GM guidance but ran out of time. Hopefully I can make a more finished version in the new year :)