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A jam submission

Euphoria Brighter Than A Comet: KINETIC VERSIONView game page

A sci-fi gender euphoria story
Submitted by Naomi Norbez (call me Bez) (@NaomiNorbez) — 1 day, 10 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Spooky Greatness#342.0922.462

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Le Grand Guignol (created in over 4 hrs)

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Comments

Submitted

I really love the concept of this piece!

My only comments are technical and mostly involve the font and color choices.

As you continue to develop this, you might consider adding options that let the player set the font to something that’s more standard. I had some trouble with the default font. Color-wise, the purple/yellow worked okay against the blue background but when links were toward the bottom of the screen in the pink section I really struggled to read them.

Another tweak that would be pretty easy to make would be to add more paragraph breaks. Long paragraphs are less readable on the screen.

Thanks for submitting your entry! :)

Developer(+1)

Thanks a lot! C: Appreciate the feedback!