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A jam submission

The Bee Pollinator:cuteness overloaded!View game page

A cute game about being a bee feeding her babys by collecting pollens!
Submitted by kiri (@kiri_is_me) — 4 hours, 17 minutes before the deadline
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I can see how this is spring related so I was excited to play.

Visuals: 3/5 - I loved the details of the bees and the interior of the hive. Besides that, the art style of the flowers and the person at the hat stall did not blend with the worldbuilding very well. I think that maybe a different approach should have been taken with these elements. The dirt roads could be a bit more polished.

Gameplay: 3/5 - The idea of tasks is nice however, if you plan on doing future game development to put this game on the market there has to be a story. Having a bunch of quests does not equate to having a story. I understand that this game is a trial run for the development of that big project however, I wanted to note again that there has to be one main story (something that drives the gameplay) and then consider side quests afterwards. The tasks themselves were not challenging however, they were cute to do. Also, the bee movement is too slow.

Music: 4/5 - The music is nice. I think when talking to NPC's in the game that it would be fun to add an additional track depending on the type of personality that the NPC's have.

Immersiveness: 3/5 - There were a lot of quests and different things going on. As the player, I do like the freedom of choosing whatever task I want to do but I also think there needs to be some order in the way things are delivered.

Originality/Style: 3/5 - I liked the art at all. The basics of the gameplay let me know what type of game it was.

Overall: 3/5

Developer

Thanks for playing!

Submitted

Very wholesome game! I absolutely loved the designs and music.

I would recommend adding a little sound effect when you get a quest done, as it stands I was finishing quests and didn't notice the pollen count going up - lol! Very cozy vibe, well done!

Developer

Thanks for Playing!

Cute art! I included it in my Cozy Spring Jam 2023 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look!

Developer

thanks actually I was watching youtube today and I found your channel and I was started searching for my game in your series but its not taken So I got sad by day now I am happy that you taken my game in your list.

Submitted

it is indeed cuteness overload! all those cute little bees! and the talking fruits! and of course the very fashionable hat. 

Since I know you want to work more on the game, here is some more in depth feedback:

I wished the game would communicate a bit better what I need to do, how much progress I've made, and when a task is done. This could be done via a task log, or via feedback from the quest giver. You could highlight the npcs who give you quest better and show via a bubble over their had if they want to give you a quest, the quest is in progress, the quest is finished and you will habe to talk to them again or quest is finished and you already got everything. 

I didn't know there were other bugs then the one on the plant, so you should highlight the other bugs better, and give feedback like 1 bug of 3 squished. 

I didn't even know there were other flowers to water then the red ones for the longest time.  Still jot sure if I got all or if it was even important to water them, too.

I got 4 petals and I have no clue where I got them from. A small textbox with "You found a petal" would have been nice. I still have them after talking to the flower who wants the petals. 

The speed of the bee is too slow! At least give me a "hold to sprint" key. 

Developer

thanks for the feedback maggie i cant be able to add the task completed scenes and popups cuz of time constraints i will add later in  future I hope you will follow my itch and patiently wait for the improved version of this game I also added discord where you can see logs in which things I am working thanks for commenting I really think of now that my hardwork didnt go waste.

Submitted

Adorable game!! but I can't but hat :(  even though I have enough pollens!!!

I noticed that the music stops and doesn't loop!! I also wish that the bee was moving a little bit more faster it's slow going to far way places.

GOOD JOB bro!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for commenting bro

Submitted(+1)

This is such a CUTE little game, I love the art style and the the cozy relaxed game play. Great job and for only 3 days, Can't wait to see if you update this with more content. Keep up the great work

Developer

Thanks flame after your comment Its really looks like my hardwork dont go waste thanks you so much