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I need critics on my first jam game

A topic by bbeetlesam created 83 days ago Views: 76 Replies: 3
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Hello, I made a game called Let There be Light (https://bbeetlesam.itch.io/let-there-be-light) for this jam! And if you have watched TechHead's stream, you'll know that my game is kinda unplayable with very little to no clues for the gameplay (and the story). 

But, besides all the flaws, I really want someone to play my game till finished and tell me their opinions on how good/bad the build-up story, the sfx, the control mechanism, and the overall design of the game, so I can improve my gamedev skill on the future!

(Tips: Increase the brightness and pay attentions little dots/dusts on the screen because they will lead you somewhere)

Submitted

dont worry, the game can be finished within 20 minutes! :)

Submitted

I'll give it a playthrough tomorrow when I get off work. Do you want me to leave any comments or feedback here or on the submission page?

Submitted

it's up to you! (but maybe on the submission page is better lol)