Play short story
Retribution's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Character investment | #20 | 2.822 | 3.353 |
| Actually a fun game | #21 | 2.030 | 2.412 |
| Sticking to the rules | #21 | 2.871 | 3.412 |
| Overall | #21 | 2.574 | 3.059 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
STARRING:
Alexandria
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It's cool that you manage to put such a clear image in my head from your writing. Nice story, high character investment.
This was beautifully written. I'm very glad that you decided to upload the fixed version.
Thank you so much! You were all very kind to me, so in the end I did upload the correct version instead of deleting and running away, which was my first instinct! This has been a learning experience for sure. But I had fun! I will participate in more jams after this one!!
The writing is very expressive, you really paint a vivid picture.
Thank you so much!! I tried! I mean I don't know how fun I could make it but I tried hard to make the reader care for Alexandria. I loved her character concept for the jam so I wanted to write her a cool origin story.