Really cool game! Two nitpicks I had:

- Walking seems pointless. It's too slow and doesn't really give any benefit. That plus the fact that you have to hold shift to run made it a bit more annoying to move.

- White text on white/light colored background. Made it difficult to read especially in these types of games.

Of course, these are not that big of a problem but could definitely be improved upon. Other than that tho, fantastic game! Really digging the presentation. Well done!

I really like the entire game concept and everything works quite well. My only problem was with the white font over clear paper, which made it quite hard to read. But it's a good game nonetheless!

Great stuff. Amazing effort put into the story and narrative. This is certainly a game worthy of firther development, I'd love to see what else you can do. Great stuff, I would love to hear your thoughts on my entry.

WOW, I am really impressed.  The artwork is pleasing to the eyes and there is a lot of polish with this project.  There are a few nitpicks I have with the game, such as not being able to move around when there is a dialogue about the mechanics and have to keep pressing space in order to bypass said dialogue (not sure if that made sense via text), but this project has a lot of potential!

Really cool and creative :o Reminded me of an adventure time episode haha