I hope ou know I read the whole ignoring the y's beacuse of the tpewriter joke. I like how sass Vick is. It was a nice change of pace from the other games.

Very nice. Who doesnt like a classic story about a badass private eye? Its a genre that will never die. I especially liked the splashes of humor here and there, almost like a parody of itself. I'm not usually too fond of twine games, but I have to say I enjoyed reading yours. Nice job!