-Intro is pretty iffy, it feels too personal for an intro to the world. Depending on how the rest of the writing is handled it is either fine or a sore point.
-The area to switch between drawer and android isn't obvious. It should either be pointed out directly in the tutorial or have a double arrow type icon or something as UI.
-I like the use of the phone to choose a custom music playlist.
-I'm a bit confused, it tells me to use the program on it but I can't find it. I also accidently changed the (coolant?) without meaning to once or twice. At best I have recorded the cleaning program onto the ram and put that into the single-use device. After that I can't figure out what to do.
-I only just barely found it, the hitbox on the port was super tiny. I will note that in general the hitboxes are quite small, though I am playing in windowed mode so that doesn't help.
-Oh that's the end I guess. I don't really play that many VN + work a job games but I think this could have promise. I would just hope there would be more gameplay than what was shown.
Put the intro on new game, and calm down the intro music. The mood between the intro and the menu is like night and day.
Bug: Menu in game is still here if I leave the game to the main menu and do a new game.
Game need more guidance, searching the locker on right mean right of the screen for me and right of the android. Also got told to fuck off because of coolant. Didn't find the way to the apply the connector in the program.
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DD53 feedback videos:
Demo Day 53 videos of games starting with letters from A – J:
https://mega.nz/folder/DdVwTYAK#ZsxVSpsd5L2yvgaqtcvBsA
Demo Day 53 videos of games starting with letters from K – Z:
https://mega.nz/folder/zBIi2A5T#DE3_eooG3HE-K3XTmpnR0g
I hope you find the video on your game useful. I wish the game would not close like that on me.
-Intro is pretty iffy, it feels too personal for an intro to the world. Depending on how the rest of the writing is handled it is either fine or a sore point.
-The area to switch between drawer and android isn't obvious. It should either be pointed out directly in the tutorial or have a double arrow type icon or something as UI.
-I like the use of the phone to choose a custom music playlist.
-I'm a bit confused, it tells me to use the program on it but I can't find it. I also accidently changed the (coolant?) without meaning to once or twice. At best I have recorded the cleaning program onto the ram and put that into the single-use device. After that I can't figure out what to do.
-I only just barely found it, the hitbox on the port was super tiny. I will note that in general the hitboxes are quite small, though I am playing in windowed mode so that doesn't help.
-Oh that's the end I guess. I don't really play that many VN + work a job games but I think this could have promise. I would just hope there would be more gameplay than what was shown.
Thanks for the feedback!
The tutorial section and many other things will be reworked, though this is supposed to be a story-centric game.
Put the intro on new game, and calm down the intro music. The mood between the intro and the menu is like night and day.
Bug: Menu in game is still here if I leave the game to the main menu and do a new game.
Game need more guidance, searching the locker on right mean right of the screen for me and right of the android. Also got told to fuck off because of coolant. Didn't find the way to the apply the connector in the program.
Thank you for playing and giving feedback!
The tutorial section will be reworked, and I already have fixed the bug and put the intro on starting a new game.