I know i am saying something again but i feel like there should be more choices with dialogue and more questions asked for the viewers. If possible add some action sequences instead of just having dialogue so the viewer doesn't have to keep on reading and if possible add some movement in the characters instead of only having eye movements.
I hope that you can again consider the suggestions (also does this go to the creators of this game?).
Can someone please reply to me to be able to tell me if this goes to the creators