Hi, I played the demo and I've enjoyed it: while the constant puns are enraging, the rest of the writing is pretty funny and I appreciate the fact that the point'n clicking is paused by minigames. I hope the rest of the game will have a lot of them!
As for the feedback, I think adding the ability to zoom in the items you get with text to read would be useful: I wanted to read the text, but I've had to stop to not strain my eyes, so being able to make the text bigger would be great.
As for the technical side, the cutscenes, including the intro with the menu, severely lagged; luckily, they were coded so that they switched back to gameplay only after the audio completed, so they weren't as jarring as they could have been. This issue might have been on my end, but for that reason I think you should include the ability to download the demo, as I suspect it's a problem that occurs only with the web version.
Good luck with your game!