真诚又富有才华的作品，令人动容!部分场景的配色可以稍作调整，可以参考康定斯基的《艺术的精神》一书中关于色彩的分析内容。期待你的其他作品！ 

A sincere and talented work, deeply moving! The color palette in some scenes could be adjusted slightly; you may refer to Kandinsky’s analysis of color in his book Concerning the Spiritual in Art. Looking forward to your other works!