LINK: https://belluler.itch.io/to-be-a-bully-demo

This is a demo of my VN, 'To Be A Bully'! This game is my biggest passion project developed from a WEBTOON of the same name (also made by me).  The game follows the narrative of Elizabeth Oak, a secondary school student whose life is torn apart by one crucial decision.

I'm looking for general feedback on the storyline and what could make the game more visually interesting. I'm particularly curious to know if this is the kind of game that someone would want to follow the development of /  play the full game. Anything would be appreciated!

"As he falls down, the rest of the world goes tumbling down behind him."