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Online Obsession

What could go wrong when you finally meet your online friend? · By sourmilk

All around, pretty solid.

A topic by terrariumtown created Feb 18, 2025 Views: 196 Replies: 2
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I really enjoyed what I've seen so far from the demo- the art is great, the mini-games were fun and from what I could tell there weren't any noticeable bugs anywhere. The only thing I have to criticize here is that the writing is kind of odd in places, with some misused words and grammatical errors that made the dialogue hard to understand at times, though aside from that I thought the pacing was fine and I'm already very invested in Adisorn as a character. Definitely looking forward to the full release! ^^

I think some of the grammatical errors were purposefully done to make the texting more realistic. (Like typos or autocorrect) But I could be wrong just an assumption tbh.

I was referring to the interactions in some of the in-person and narration segments, actually. There was at least one line of dialogue I can remember off the top of my head where the word "simultaneously" is misused, and a few other parts with similar errors, and I think there were a few instances where some words were mistakenly repeated, too.