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Chapter One - The Party Review (not happy)

A topic by OttifantSir created 71 days ago Views: 104
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There is too little story and too boring characters  in  Chapter 1 to make me interested in playing this game any further. The most defining part of it, for me, was how much I wanted to dig out the over-painted eye-crud on Alexis. It was so distracting I barely managed to see she is an athlete, and I didn't even notice she had cornrows until she was shown in the ending screens. None of the women seems interesting, and knowing that one of them is a thief doesn't make them any more endearing. Kevon is a typical jock-party-all-night clichè. 

I tried playing through this a few times, with different choices, but regardless of the choices you make, there is nothing in Chapter 1 that entices me to want to play Chapter 2 and further. The ending doesn't make it feel urgent to solve why it happened, it just feels like it doesn't concern the MC at all after the party, because you haven't made any connections with any of them (even if choosing the 'right' choice in conversations), you have only been roped into providing free services for these women, and get a roid-rager as an enemy because of it.

And I can't put my finger on what exactly it is, but Sara is creepy as all H. I tried talking to her while at every alco-level, and there's just something wrong with her that makes me feel creeped out, and hoping that MC won't have to interact with her at all.

Judging from what we get to see in Chapter 1, I wouldn't recommend this game to anyone, especially not for a price.

I don't expect the creators to like my review, but I do hope they respect that people have differing opinions, and allow others to see that not everyone who tries this game thinks it's the greatest game of all time. I genuinely respect creators that don't rage-block me for a bad review, because I may not like your game, but I do respect that integrity of character.