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Looking for feedback on first game

A topic by Fossilpaw Studios created Jan 06, 2024 Views: 181 Replies: 2
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Late last year we released our first game, a short puzzle platformer called Tonii. We just put out a web build for the game to make it more accessible. I’m not sure the page is the best though, is there anything I should change? Also, how could we reach more players with the game?

Link to game

I enjoyed the game it was challenging yet fun and the music selection was dope. I will say its super punishing to miss one jump. Adding a start from last checkpoint would be nice, instead of restarting the entire level. For your first game this is awesome keep it up.

Hi,

  • The animated font in the beginning is giving me a headache. Try to make it more static.
  • The music choice is very good!
  • The gameplay is just fun! I really liked the ideas and the challenges.
  • The graphics are modest but fit to overall style of the game
  • The main character moves bit too quick, sometimes it's purely matter of my dexterity.

As for the page: I find it fitting to the style of your game so I wouldn't worry too much about it.

Overall it was fun to play it. Very good work, especially for your first project.

If you find a minute or two, please share your thoughts about my project also. Thanks!