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Visual Novel Prototype Feedback

A topic by My created Jan 05, 2024 Views: 110
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I'm currently working on a little visual novel project and am in desperate need of some feedback. It's a dark medieval fantasy visual novel. 

It's very barebones at the moment since I've only been working on it for 2 days. I really want feedback on my writing/the premise so far to know if it's interesting to players and if the chapters are too long or short for a VN. 

It's very early in development so there is a lot of placeholder text/images, just to warn you

Any and all feedback is appreciated, thank you! 

https://parasytemy.itch.io/untitled-helfier-game