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Stranded in Space

You wake up on a spaceship filled only with women travelling to another planet, unaware of how you got there. · By Wildman Dev

Dialogue Proofreader?

A topic by n8knows created Oct 24, 2023 Views: 191 Replies: 4
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Hey @Wildman Dev, love this game! I've laughed out loud so many times!
I'm wondering... would you be interested in someone to proofread the dialogue/text? I've caught a couple of typos, but don't document them all as I'm playing the game.  Would love to help contribute in this way, as I have no idea how to code this kind of stuff, and a large portion of the game is the immense amount of text, amirite?

Let me know, and keep up the great work!!

Developer

I replied and fixed the ones you found on the Steam Discussion board.

Minor typos :: Stranded in Space General Discussions (steamcommunity.com)

I'm happy to fix any more that you find. Don't feel obligated or let it take the fun away from the game for you, but I would appreciate it a lot.

Absolutely! I'm the kind of guy that puts away the board game with all the pieces grouped together and cards facing the right way... and almost enjoys it as much as the game itself! (ok, sometimes more depending on the game :-D )

I was hoping there was some kind of file I could read through like a book? If not, is the game available mobile? I only have it on my desktop right now.

Thanks again!

#TeamHaylee

Developer

Have you joined the Discord? I can send you a mobile link from there.

I was thinking about the proofreading myself.  I noticed a number of instances where a preposition was missing as well. It's a minor detail and the dialog is still understandable. I also wonder why so much of the spoken dialog ends with a question mark. 

This is a fun and imaginative game.  Well done. Looking at the development log and how long it has taken to get to day 17, I hope it doesn't take years of game development to get to Elysium. I would hate to see the game development abandoned along the way.