hello.

I made a VN called Vampie Tale. I recieved a bit of feedback, some bad some good, but not enough. It has a really unique plot twist that might go under the radar for some people. While it's relatively successful, I feel it could be better. What should I change about it?

https://ozaki-studio.itch.io/vampie-tale

Note: it's really difficult to change the script.

Oh yeah, I remember that one!

I actually remember the plot twist being one of the weaker parts of the narrative. Going in blind, I was expecting it to show up somewhere at the end, but didn't find one... It definitely went over my head. To me it just seemed like a rather natural and typical conclusion for this kind of story. I don't think you have to change anything else except for the twist; And I'm interested in helping you out with it.

I've already read the novel, would you mind telling me what the twist was supposed to be, under a spoiler warning? I think I can work from there.