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[Feedback][TTRPG]Looking for advice on readability, mechanics, and general layout.

A topic by Mild_Iron created Aug 01, 2023 Views: 134 Replies: 2
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I've been trying to get some feedback on a TTRPG I've been working on for a while, and this seems like the place to do so. I've generated a set of download keys for you to use, with the stipulation that feedback would be greatly appreciated. 

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https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks/download/FJemygTmfEymPyu7WmKR28Dfa-...

https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks/download/NPemygTmfEymPyu7WmKR28Dfa-...
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https://mild-iron.itch.io/through-the-cracks/download/QNemygTmfEymPyu7WmKR28Dfa-...

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A little unconventional for a feedback topic for me, but interesting nonetheless!

It's quite overwhelming with the amount of effort and planning you've put into this; DND fans would probably go crazy over this. This tabletop will find the right audience and will likely be very fun and interesting to play.

Naturally, it isn't very readable to me due to the sheer amount of stuff, but it is very organized and well-presented in an informative way to the reader; This would make an excellent rulebook. Someone out there is going to read this entire thing and love it...

The mechanics are also well organized and seem to be balanced and effective. Hopefully there aren't any glaring inconsistencies that could confuse the player, if they exist I wouldn't be able to find them. Some of them are quite funny, like the Fur Bearer and Party Drugs. 

The general layout holds a lot of information, but probably as everything the players need to understand and play the game. I forgot how crazy and interesting tabletops can be!

Hey thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read through it, really.