So last week I released the first part of Grass Elemental, an upcoming RPG adventure with a retro style and a focus on nonviolence! I'm looking for as much feedback as I can:

• Is the game too short? 
• Is the game too long?
• Is knife-throwing a sport?
• Did you like the song?
• How about the retro style?
• Or the RPG feel?
• Is it boring after a while?
• D o n ' t   f o r g e t   a b o u t   t h a t   d e a l . . .

(jk you don't have to answer all that just leave honest feedback)

Replying here is fine, but please feel free to comment on the game page as well! Just a preference of mine :)

Anyway. Back to giving random people feedback!

it's ok bro

So, this isn't really my cup of tea because it's narrative heavy and a bit on the surrealist side, so take my feedback with a grain of salt.

Anyway, the music is great.

IMO the main improvement here would be increasing the ratio of interactive gameplay to plot exposition. Also, the narration could use a bit more visual interest. Not necessarily full blown pixel art backgrounds, but even some background color changes to reflect the changes in the mood could go a long way. Like a greenish background for start when the forest is doing well, and then transitioning to yellowish to represent withering, stuff like that. Another neat little thing could be giving the singers a couple of costume changes, I'm kinda getting school play vibes from them so it could be cute to put them in stylized tree costumes for example.

Really enjoyed it ! The art direction is top Notch and it's got pretty clever and original ideas I haven't seen elsewhere