voice says "crumble at any singns" but text says "crumble at anymore singns". the last sentence is the same both in text and voice.
here the voice says "the same desire too all because of you"
here the voice says "you've been having"
Those small inconsistencies aside though, great work so far. Having a fully voice acted demo is extremely rare and the story seems decent (and far more original than most of the indie VNs out here).
Will finish reading the rest of the demo later today or tomorrow and report back if i find any other noteworthy things.