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For your consideration: (playing public version 0.2)

Vital Strike card only appears to apply vulnerable to target rather than as the card description to all enemies.

Event Temptations: after picking either option, the text "1:any_hand_card" appears briefly on screen rather than showing an actual card & image like other events that effects cards from your deck (do not think the pure/impure effects are being added to any card in your deck - assume it should be picking a random card).

Event Hypo Horse, first time the top option is 'Abstain' & the bottom one is 'Get on' subsequent options have 'Hold om' at the top and 'Get off' at the bottom. Sugguest you swop all of the subsequent choices so that the 'Hold on' is the bottom option and 'Get off' is the top option, this would match the flow of actions throughout the event, i.e. the top option is the stop/avoid choice and the bottom option is the interact with event choice. (This would also match other events with the first/top option being to stop or avoid the event for minimal penalty)

During combat if you defeat a Bee they momentarly 'stand up' again after falling to the floor, unlike other enemies who all crumple to the floor and fade out.

For your consideration: (playing public version 0.2)

There is an inconsistency with the Lamia event [150G to test a toy (vibrating toy)].

After acepting the Lamia tells you it goes in your ass, but on the next page 'the Lamia smiles as you push the plug inside your vagina'.

Some items for your consideration (playing public version 0.40 win):

• Mini-job: volunteer milking at the warehouse (rather confusing)
  Talking with Gynoid Mutsuki (the first time after checking message board), there is no milking option, only 'can you get me out of this bondage gear' (even if you have none on) option which actually offers you the deal to remove bondage gear in exchange for milking.
  [Perhaps there should be a volunteer to be milked option in addition to remove bondage gear option or re-worded to make things clearer?]

• Bug: When interacting with one of the girls, at times the interaction changes to the other girl for a line then changes back again.
  [First noticed this when removing anal beads from another girl using the hook the first time, also was happening in v0-36]

• Bug: If you silence (gag) either of the other girls they still talk to you when you interact with them rather than just being able to mumble.

• Would love to have the very transparent 'sleeping clothes' the girls wakeup wearing as wardrobe wearable item and the 'pink thing' Kyra is wearing at the very begining on her shuttlecraft. [As the items are already in the game it should not be that hard to do?]

• Also it would be good (if possible) when wearing the strap-on if the 'finger me' option after kissing another girl, allowed her to touch/stroke the strap on, instead of saying they can not touch you because you are wearing the chastity belt with the strap-on. [Perhaps changing it to, or adding it as a handjob option?]

• Could do with a walk button/toggle as if feels wrong to either run everywhere or only crouching to move slowly especially when another character asks you to follow them and walk away, and you are only able to run or crouch after them.
  [Perhaps change moving forward to start slowly (walking) and after a time of continuous moving change to runing, or always walk when inside building or on platforms etc, or make walking the default move speed and have a run button instead.]

• Don't think the realistic flesh look of the strap-on is appropriate for the setting. I would have though it should have a more Gnyoid aesthetic colouring or something complementary with the chastity belt its attached to (especially since it is describe as still a prototype during the transport, spa and attachment department events). It also looks kind of wrong when worn by a Gynoid.
  [Perhaps there could be some choice of look; realistic, gynoid or chastity belt for instance or some means to change it like 3D printing a replacement outer skin.]

Bug for your consideration (playing public version 0.1PC):
If you maximize the game window, the night time overlay remains the size of the original winow and you are left with a 'day-time' border around the edge of the window.

A minor error for you, with call  a slave to your room interaction.

With the 'Bring another slave to/to be f...' you a prompted to order your slaves to undress, even when both slaves are already naked (other interaction only prompt you when your slave is wearing some clothes). Also (for female/female slaves), when one slave is given the strap-on to put on, they also put on underwear, which renains on after the interaction has finished.

Some items for your consideration,

Playing from the beginning again it feels wrong for the resource producing buidling like lumber camp and fishery to be placed adjcent to the relavent terain (forest/sea) whereas other building (mines farms etc) are placed on the relevant terain itself (hills/mountain/plains). 

Also it very annoying to repeatly use a Permanent Yoke by accident (instead of a Portable Yoke) when tring to capture monster girls(consumables button). Can permanent items like this be just listed under the equipment button instead, or moved to the end of the consumables list.

Some items for your consideration,

When picking a slave for some activity (like calling a slave to your room) it would be nice to be able to check the slave's stats before chosing (like you can view when on the world map).

Could do with more options with the villages (maybe cities too), for villages how about something like demanding hospitality from the village, This could give you no upkeep cost for that day and maybe a companion for the evening as well.

Some more implements would be nice, from simple ones like wrist/ankel cuffs, a leash, tail plug,  dildos and dildo pants, paddles and floggers, to more complex ones like a cage, pillory, wooden horse and a sex machine.

I would hope/assume a particular implement would give some sort of bonus to gaining skill experience appropriate to the implement used or to unlock a new activity/interaction.

Additional save slots would be nice, so that you ca have a couple of different games on the go at the same time.

A couple of bugs for you in the demo version here

At the start of the game, the first set of dialogue in the house,
the MC says 'orney' probably should be 'jorney' (might be an issue with following on from the previous line).

During combat the MC is referred to as MC, where as other character (Dastiness) is referred to by name.

If you try and interact with the campsite marker on the world map you get a line of russian spoken by the MC, (despite setting the game's language as default or english)

For your consideration:

A bug (playing v0.2.7), the nose ring does not appear to display on the Bee-girl.

For your consideration:

It would be so much easier if you could run and crouch when moving using the mouse buttons as well.

Also it might be nice if when you have found and equiped an item, it would change colour (I'm assuming you need to find/equip an item before you can equip via the TAB menu). Or are all items destined to be needed for quests eventually.

Finally whilst I don't mind the guards taking your money when they catch you, it might be good if you could stash it somewhere (perhaps around the staue or enterance gate). I'm guessing from the story-line there will be an endpoint at somepoint relating to the amount of money collected/earned.

Would be nice to have the option to be able to rename the varrious names you can change in the game.

For your consideration:

Some typos for you, (found in public version 0.7.17):

Pizza night:

Azraesha says - 'What makes it so memorable is its crust. The bake the fish whole, with...' and '...looks like the gaze into the sky...'
probably should be '...They bake...' and  '...like they gaze...'

For your consideration

It would be great if there was an appropriate animation/image displayed when you capture a monster girl, rather than it just fading to black like when you neutralize one. Obyiously you would need one for each equipment/method of capture, (yoke, horse etc).

Also, as building/road placement can be  quite important it would be nice if it were possible to move a building rather than having to delete it and then rebuild again when you find you can not fit a road in later. [Maybe give it a nominal mana cost, increasing the further you move.]

Some items for your consideration:

Some typos for you, (found in public version 0.11.1):

(Day 13)
Akatsuki - '...Every so often, however, her gaze seems to wander and she goes out of her way to check if you're still hard, and then make you so if you're not...'
probably should be'...then makes you...'

(Day 22)
MC - '...You check, but Victoria is still fast asleep, so you leave her to lay in a little longer as usual...'
probably should be'...to lie in...'

(Day 23)
MC - '...I do, good girl...'
probably should be'...I did, good...'

(Day 25)
narration - '...She doesn't stop walking though, simply clinging to you arm for support, obdiently willing to go whereever you lead her...'
probably should be '...go wherever you...'

A couple of items for your consideration:

With the move 'Grovel' it would be much more appropriate, if the affect character held the pose for longer, ie until the start of their next turn or until attacked by another foe etc. (Don't know if you want any additional penalties at higher levels?)

Minor bug, the septum piercing on a character (large picture in gear 'tab') disappears when a simple ball gag is equipped. (Don't know if other gags are similarly effected)

[Playing ver 0.2.0]

Would be very nice to be able to use the arrow keys for movement also in mini-games rather than having to switch over to the default WASD each time, (perfer to use the arrow keys in the main game).

Some more for you.

Prolog

'Before long, we has chatted for so long the sun had already settled when...'
probably should be '...already set when...'

'Curiously enough, she seems unaffected by the force.'
probably should be '...she seemed unaffected...'

'It also seems she knows what it is.'
probably should be '...also seemed she...'

'...And she seems to be very pissed about it...'
probably should be '...she seemed to...'

'Suddenly, her eyes lock onto mine.'
probably should be '... eyes locked onto...'

Some items for your consideration:

Some typos for you:

Speaking with Nova
Me 'Yeah....this has definitely been going on for too long, been to detailed and felt too real so far for a mere dream.'
Probably should be '...been too detailed...'

Nova 'Krushna, a tall demaon...help out with manual labor, since she's strong...'
Probably should be '...labour...'

Nova 'Our staff is usually at one of the marked locations anyway.'
Probably should be '...staff are usually...'

In the Gym with Felicia
'she continues to purr, showing now sign of wanting you to stop.'
Probably should be '...showing no sign...'

At the beach with Emilia
Emilia 'The staff at the resort is busy most of thetime,and...'
Probably should be '...resort are busy...'

In kait room
Me 'Are all guest rooms here like that?'
Probably should be '...like this?'

The 'Me (thinking thought)' prompt doesn't feel right.
Perhaps you could try 'Me (thinking) instead or something else?

Some errors/bugs and inconsistencies for your consideration, (currently playing the public version (V0.08).

• Quest to go see alice:
  Alice says "And while right now, there's no concreate evidence..."
  should probably be "And while right now, there's no concrete evidence..."
• Intimacy with Lilly:
  • Help Lily study (love 30+):
    MC says "Take off dress and bra..."
    should probably be "Take off your dress and bra..."
    MC says "It's what Lily?..."
    should probably be "What is it Lily?..."
  • Date 1 (love 40/45+):
    The MC tells Lily to get naked, but Lily keeps her panties on
  • Lunch (love 30+):
    MC says "There's no chance Alice comes around again..."
    should probably be "There's no chance that Alice comes around again..."
    Alice says "I want to wait around until Lily come back..."
    should probably be "I want to wait around until Lily comes back..."
  • Basic training (sub 30+):
    Lily says "Geez...What has happen to me?..."
    should probably be "Geez...What has happened to me?..."
    Lily says "But I think I enjoy when (MC), orders me around..."
    should probably be "But I think I enjoy it when (MC), orders me around..."
  • Kneeing (sub 30+):
    MC says "Lily, did you not here me?..."
    should probably be "Lily, did you not hear me?..."
    Lily says "But I can't let this pervert how I feel..."
    should probably be "But I can't let this pervert know how I feel..."
  • Spanking (sub 30+)
    Lily says "But do you want me to spread my legs or keep them closed?..." should probably be "But do you want me to close my legs or keep them spread?..."
    Menu options 'Close them spread as I spank you...'
    should probably read 'Close them again as I spank you...
• Quest waiting for Cecilia to calm down and visit:
  After saving Cecilia and then running away from her and the giant boulder, the MC is supposed to be awarded agility +1, but Guild Licence still shows agility as 0 afterwards.

Have noticed that there are still numerous spelling and grammer mistakes (a least half a dozen in the intro sequence alone). As this is suposed to be the final version is there any point in compling a list of corrections?

I had quite a long list from playing the previous 0.3.0.1 public version, which I suspect are still present in this version.

Some bugs for your consideration, (currently playing the public version LustHunter 0.102.0(hotfix2) windows as female hunter)

When you talk to a Forest Fairy male they give the wrong gender specific line  - "...if you lose, you will lick my hairy pussy..."

Training with Mirana.
No/missing image when you defeat her (error message about missing image appears briefly).

In wardrobe.
Satyr Horns not showing when you filter on head slot.
Sailor neck not showing when you filter on neck slot.
Bunny's pantyhose not showing when you filter on legs and/or panties slots.
Eternal arms not showing when you filter on arm slot.
Don't know if anything else is not filtering properly

In Attack cards/cards list menu.
When you use any sort by method, the result don't make much sense or are not much use. The order appears somewhat random and/or based on the order the cards were ontained.
Would expect identical or similar cards to be grouped together whatever the sort method, (e.g if you have 4 active face slap cards they should be together rather than scattered about).

Maybe you need to have a seperate list for deactivated cards. What about other sort options like stamina cost or damage dealt/blocked for instance.

A typo has sneaked by.

After installing mining laser (day1)
T'Ris says... "I noticed that the a minining lasrt has com online."
shoud be... "I noticed that a mining laser has come online."

And another one.

After T'Ris updates the navigation computer
T'Ris says... "its signatures are interesting..."
should probably be "its signature is interesting..."

Yet another one.

After Nimhe comes onboard the first time.
MC(Jim) says..."I have prepared Guest Cabin One for you."
..."The uplink is installed as well."
should probably be... "The uplink is installed there as well."

Also the new game title page still has "this game is under development..." on it.

And finally in the Active Quest menu

Should the show/hide future content button be removed now that the games is suppost to be finished?

Some bugs (currently playing the public version 0.3.0.1)

• With the quest Nicole's necklace if you are standing on the opposite side of the table to Nicole when you talk to her about her necklace, the game hangs up. (Think the game is trying move Konna onto the stool but is unable to do so from the opposite side of the table.) Quest works if standing next to Nicole.

• With the warehouse third room sorting boxes puzzle (3 boxes), it is possible to get stuck on the wrong side of the boxes after completing the puzzle.

• When spanking Lana, you get the option to 'pull panties' (get the sound effect too) despite the fact Lana doesn't wear any. The game should not give the 'pull panties' option for girls who don't wear them.
  (This would also allow for random girls to have a small chance to not wear panties and the spanking routine opperate correctly.)

Some items for your consideration:

• There is a 'smart' buy option, can you implement a corresponding 'smart' sell option.

• When using the 'Bot Configration & Training' unit it would be usful when selecting parts if you could filter the parts, something like you can on the 'Lab Manager' console.

• It would be good if repair jobs also occurred on the lower decks after access to them has been restored.
  Also if you ignore repairs it would seem appropriate to have some sort of negative consequence for the ship (apart from the obvious not gaining favour points with T'Ris), like a minus efficiency penalty to all ship subsystems per repair (may want to set a maximum limit however.)

• As the ship's decks appear somewhat colour coded (blue,red and green), match this on the varrious mini maps and deck shortcut buttons with the coresponding appropriate hint of colour.

• Could you at least give BB-2 a character card, afterall it was part of the original crew and on the title screen too.
  It would nice if there was a bit more interaction with BB-2, as BB-2 only pops up with certain events and then disappears. (Maybe encounter BB-2 at random on the ship, add it to the daily morning orders with some minor task.)

Another one:

• (this maybe work in progress) but when T'Ris is in the mess hall at 18:00, she is always in her free uniform despite what daily uniform orders you've set.

Some items for your consideration:

• After completing 'Nimhe's Toys' quest, you can use your wrist unit on the handcuffs again (repeating the start of the quest). Perhaps there should be an alternive dialogue when interacting with the handcuffs after completing this quest.

• Don't known if this is a bug or just something I've just not found out yet, but Nimhe seems to disappear from the ship at 22:00 - even if you are in deep space. (Don't known if this is related to Nimhe being in the Entertainment District at that time before joining the crew.) Similarly Khelara seems disappears at 13:00.

• Looking at monitoring at 20:00, the shower image of Khelara shows the time as 21: something instead of 20: something.

• On the mini map deck-2 has location H2 but on mouse hover-over it comes up 'Lower Hallway One' and on deck-3 there is also a H2 and on mouse hover-over it comes up 'Level Two Hallway'.

• Vee is seemingly inconsistanty named V and Vee in different places, dialogues, quests and in the gallery

Cann't stop playing this game at the moment (currently playing the public version 0.3.0.1)

Some ideas for your consideration:

• Figging
  Add the concept of figging to the game as it fits in perfectly with the theme of corporal punishment. (Figging - a peeled ginger-root butt-plug or a similar effect can be produced from an irritant balm appied between the cheeks, - look it up if you want a complete explanation.)
  From a game mechanic perspective it should be ease to add into the spanking routine by having an extra option following on from the pull clothes / pull panties options. Whilst I leave it you to implement the exact in game effects and how it interacts with other game mechanics, it should certainly increase the intensity of the punishment. Maybe reserve it for repeat offenders instead of, or as well as additional hits. Would need to add appropriate punishment and admin edicts to enable use on convicts and the court employees.
  Also this would give the opportunity add a quest or quest line to obtain apporpriate supplies for use. For instance maybe a foraging trip with TAnni outside of the city somewhere to obtain supplies for personal use (like having spanking implements to use). Also to secure a regular supply for court use, maybe get your own village to grow it or to forage for it etc.

• Docks Bar
  Add an option for cornertime from the dice game, either as a betting option at the start or an alternative ending for spanking routine (like spank / pull clothes / end / cornertime). (I'm sure all the bar patrons would appreciate the view)

• Friday night punishment
  In addition to the individual view of cornertime for each girl punished, have a combined view of cornertime for everyone who was punished (you could see it by sitting on the spanking stool perhaps). Maybe have the option only appear if everyone has been punished.

• Random girls Extend the range of randoms girls with by having a varriation in size as well as colour and type.

• Restoration of Court rooms (this may be work in progress)
  Have it cost time and gold to restore all the rooms in the court and not just the lobby, rather than the room auomatically being restored when the appropriate vacany is filled. The cost and time can be varried according to the room, for instance the cornertime room could be 30 gold and 1 day as it is a simple room, where as the archivist's room is a lot more complex therfore could be 100 gold and 2 or 3 days. The investigator room can fall somewhere between the two and the lobby should have high day cost to match the 200 gold to represent the high class finish required.
  Whilst Raya is restoring a room she should not get her ability to save court fees. Also if caught with spoilt supplies it should add a day to the restoration task since she wastes the day cleaning up. The vacany should only be allowed to be filled once the particular room has been restored completed.

Playing web v5.2.24 - On level 8 (the Warden) in all the dialogue that occurs it makes reference to a collar. But if you are defeated or submit, the item turns out to be a belt (Warden's Belt) and not a collar.

Suggest you modify the dialogue accordling to a belt instead.

An error with some items for your consideration, (current playing 2.7.0 but 2.8.0 appears affected too)

The items condom bodysuit(underwear) and enema plug(plug/outfit) don't seem to want to play together nicely.

Not sure which item may be at fault (probably the bodysuit not handling the swollen belly? or should the two item be mutually exclusive). Also the bodysuit could be similarly affected whenever the character gets a swollen belly (like with the opposing move 'incubation'). Any other similar item may be likewise affected.

For your consideration (current playing Windows Alpha 2.7.0 version).

With the change to a non-linear dungeon the old moral system doesn't work very well and is probably in need of an overhaul. Currently you can quite easily end up with zero moral just by walking around even before encountering any fights, especial early on with low difficult dungeons.

As a starting point I would suggest something like, for each new dungeon room you encounter cost 1 moral and for each fight encounter cost 8 moral (with curios coming back give them something in-between say 4 moral). In addition this can also be scaled against the dungeon difficult, so novice dungeons would be 1/4/8 moral; adept dungeons would be 2/6/12, veteran 3/8/16 and elite 4/10/20. (May also need to tweak the starting/base amount of moral and bonus moral from barracks/items.)

Alternatively more in line with the old system, you could only lose moral (think it used to be a base of 10) when you encounter a fight (and with curios coming back give them a smaller cost say 5), empty rooms would not cost you any moral.

Or you could take a completely different approach, and start with a large moral value (say 100+) and every step you take in the dungeon costs you 1 moral, (obviously this would also mean extra work having to update items/bonuses in line with the new moral scale).

P.S. Although better, still getting noticeable lag/freezing when casting Holy Bolt.

(From the other games) I think the only fix is to check setting & re-upload it again. (I don't use the upload tool so I don't know the circumstances that cause this occasional screw up.)

No windows. My usual archive tool that normally opens zip & rar files throws an error will not open it (have tried re-downloading but get the same result).

I'm guessing the itch upload tool has screwed up this file, I see this with other games occasionally (the uncompressed version is in the usual zip format).

The Lucky Paradox compressed version for windows/linux is being downloaded as a rar file instead of the usual zip and is giving error when you try and open archive (cannot open file as archive).

A couple of items for your consideration

Current playing Ero Dungeons Windows Alpha 2.5.1 version (full screen).

Getting the following glitch/error. When in a dungeon and I make the move 'Holy Bolt' (or the other side does a 'Love Blast' - I'm guessing they share the same base animation etc), the game freezes for a couple of seconds (I get the spinning blue windows cursor and then a flicker of my windows desktop/taskbar) before continuing. No other moves from either side appear to have the same problem that I've come across yet (novice/adept). (I'm guessing either some missing resource or graphic call linked to this move and windows is searching for it and/or timing out before continuing.)

Also free movement in the dungeon map view seems unnecessary and over complex, (I had quite some trouble advancing to the next room using the mouse). I would have thought it much simpler to just have a couple of addition buttons in the right hand corner, like 'advance' (to the next room) and 'interact' (to interact with objects or people [to start the fight]).

Would be nice if when you have one of your adventures kidnapped during a dungeon, you automatically get them back at the end if you carry on and complete the dungeon. Or offer an additional encounter when you reach the exit that the player can choose to do or exit instead.

Also shouldn't items like 'maid belt' and 'plugs of captivity' block an opposing move like 'incubation'.

Just loving this game. Started playing it last week and haven't been able to stop since. Really like the alternate camera angles, hope we get many more. 

Would like to pass on a few bugs/consistences I've noticed whilst I've been playing so far, (I'm still in act1 / chapter 1 I think).

Currently playing 0.13.2 public (pc) version

1) After Debbie is caught fondling the nurse in class, during the evening scene you get the "apologise to Lucy not slam her into the locker" dialogue. Should there be a keep your hands off the nurse dialogue instead, before deciding on her punishment?

2) During a private punishment with Cassandra, after removing clothing including skirt, the skirt reappearing during the top half of the body search, then disappears again with the bottom half. (This also happens with Debbie, although the picture is cut higher, you can still see the top of the skirt on the edge of the screen, sorry to be so picky.)

top half search - skirt appears

bottom half - skirt disappears

3) During a private punishment with Cassandra, apply ointment animation appears to be the same as massage buttocks. (I realise this may be due to work-in progress rather than a bug).

4) Uniform inspection with Alice by vending machine, typo in dialogue, should be "Now lift up you skirt..." not "No lift up you skirt..."

5) Encounter with Harriet by the lockers in the sports centre, you appear to be able to make multiple uniform inspections, unlike other encounters with the girls in the classroom corridor.  (This also happens with Ada in the corridor too.)

6) Encounter with Faye by the book case in the dorm, she always repeats the skipped math lesson dialogue after triggering the nurse's office event.

(Would be nice if Faye lapsed occasionally and this event was repeatable in game [and similar such events]. I know there's the replay menu but it not the same as in-game.)

7) Interacting with Rachel seeing Dona in corridor, typo in dialogue, should be "She once asked me why her..." not "she once asked my..."

8) During a private punishment with Cassandra, when instructed to remove clothing, her cardigan reappears when she goes to remove her skirt.

removed cardiganremoving skirt

I'm sure I've had another instance of a re-appearing skirt during a private punishment, but can't remember the exact circumstances so haven't been able to check and repeat it. As best as I can remember it occurred when the girl was over Miss Newman lap, (may have just levelled up), the skirt re-appeared when a white edged grey dialogue box appeared on screen, disappearing along with the dialogue box when clicking to advance.

Still having issues with the "Pleasure Chamber". Although it is now appearing in the explore shrine menu, clicking on it does nothing except return you to the same menu. However you seem to inadvertently get dropped into the "Pleasure Chamber" menu when you click on "Leave" from the "Great Hall" menu after trying the "Pleasure Chamber" menu item. Also when you train a devout it appear to cost 3 pleasure points, shouldn't the cost be 1?.

I'm not a fan of the pleasure/play points idea, if you feel you need some sort of points why not use the Godpoint concept you already have instead adding more.

If it was me I would be keeping it simple and would treat the "Pleasure Chamber" just like healing in the "Hot Springs" with just a set number of uses per day (say 5 initially) whether you use them for training or play. Keep the option to buy addition uses per day for coin (maybe with an increasing scale of cost or even Godpoints). Also maybe training should cost a token amount of Godpoints or coin depending if you or someone else are doing the training.

Now works, thanks.

Web version encounter "game bug" and crashes when you try talking to the Orc on the wharf in Larklast town