heyyo, efflo! I dont know if anyone's pointed this out yet, but i believe this may be an error:
(You look up at him, turning the deadness of your heart and mind outward. His silhouette appears to loom slightly taller among the trees, a spindly entwinement of moonlight and madness—unmoved.
"Come, Ire. The sun will rise soon.")
my mc is malice, and yet U calls them "ire" instead of malice during the scene after he touches the mc's scarred lip(?), specifically after the spar with the weapon/magic option — and while im on the topic of this, i wanted to also say:
(You touch the spot where you scalded yourself with magic, only a few short months ago. The mottled scarring below your wrist has already faded, and you barely notice it now when you look down.)
i also have scalded myself on my wrist (its faded and healed now)! i was surprised to see that the mc had a burn mark on their wrist, too (^_^) sorry for the long comment if it bothers you!