Could be my computer, but when I click any of the links i.e. "Character", "Inventory", etc. it pulls up a blank red screen that blocks everything and displays nothing, with no way to go back, thus destroying that go on the game. Is there a certain prefered browser we should be playing the game in or are these known errors that are going to be fixed sometime in the future?
That said, strong start to the game. Looking forward to seeing where this one will go.
Loving the concept and what I've seen so far of this. Couple minor bugs -- your probably aware of them, but just in case, here's one that leapt out at me:
So I picked the friend's brother route, as the whole step brother thing wasn't my cup of tea. On that path, there was a problem where some of the text seemed predicated towards the step brother path, unfortunately, i.e. this here --> ""His name is Ruin, my mom married his dad a couple of years ago." You say holding your breath a bit at the judgment that the soon to come after, you knew it was wrong to have these types of feels towards your Madison older brother but you couldn't help it."
Also, in the beginning, when I try to set names and such and then use the hyperlinks to do character descriptions, the name becomes unsaved.
Anyway, good luck with the project. The story feels strong and interesting, and certainly relatable for most of us.
So far so great -- loving the characters, their universe, the plot all so much so far . . . lots of great tension. Maybe once in a while things are a little to Hogworts in my opinion, but honestly being a little familiar to one of the most beloved book series of all times is not a bad thing. Looking forward to seeing the game continue to progress. Is there a patron for the game?
Hello -
Absolutely loving your game HoneyPot; the art is great, the rpg and choice point elements are perfect. Really want to play more, or if thius project has been suspended, possibly try and support one of your other games, potentially.
However, it seems to no longer be on Patreon, which is not surprising given all the terrible changes going on with that company. Are you on subscribe star or anywhere else?
Anyway, hope you continue on with this game or something similiar. Can't wait to play more!
Overall I liked the first story - the character was interesting, the art was niiice, the situations worked . . . however, it felt like we lost control of the character to easily; i.e. *spoiler* if you agree to go out with the gym guy you automatically have sex with the gym guy; I felt like this would have benefited from more choice points to either allow bailing out at a certain point or show some game mechanics that force the outcome. Granted this is a failing in many other adult games to, but yeah. Anyway, that criticiscm aside, looking forward to seeing what the other stories will be.
In my playthrough I opted to not go for the hook up with Julian yet at the start of the second trimester I had this text:
"You're quite surprised to suddenly receive a text from Julian. You haven't spoken to him since the whole debacle with his girlfriend coming home..."
Think its a minor bug as since I never did the hookup activity with him I never met his girlfriend.
So, I've been on a bit of a visual novel kick as of late so I've been a lot of good games like this one. That said, out of all the games I've played recently, this is the one I am most looking forward to the full release. I really hope the creators of this game are still hard at work on it as this is a story I and I suspect others want to see more of.
