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I think you have a very complete game loop, with the pause page, UI and game over page.  The mouse is really cute, and the whole game has the right artwork that puts together the theme. However, it would be better if there is more animation, for example animation when the spider is killed by the cheese ball. Also, the hit box of the flying spider is a lot bigger than it looks like. It was really annoying getting killed while there is still a great gap between my character and the spider. 

I had an amazing experience overall playing this game. The artwork in this game is extraordinary, especially the main character. The animation and the design of her is really cute. The levels progressed at stably increasing difficulty (the last one is too hard for me to pass). The UI showing the character's health is really good, but it would be better if somehow the player is instructed how to use the portion to regain health. One small glitch I experience during the game is that whenever I turn to the left direction, the camera focus snap back a little too far. It would be a even better game if this is fixed.

This is a really cool game to play overall. The music is chilling, and there are some sound effects of the brick disappearing, but it would make the game even better if there are more sound effects added when the character jumps or collect balloons. The UI in this game is a little too small for the player to see, as well as the instruction at the beginning of the game. Although we know the goal is to collect as many balloons as possible to get to the party, it would be better if we can actually apply the balloons somewhere in the game or let there be punishment for missing one. Also, I noticed occasionally there was a red bow and a red high-heel shoe that can be collected, but there is no other indication of me collecting it apart from it disappearing, and I don't know what they do. It would be good more is implemented for those items in game. The levels has increased difficulty, and the last one with moving platforms, thorns and disappearing floor is interesting to play. Keep up the good work!

I love the artworks in this game. They are amazing and they fit well together to match the theme. The background music also contributes to a chill, adventurous and magical game atmosphere. However, it would be really nice if the music can be added to the start page as well. The instruction at the beginning of the game is really helpful, but it would be a lot better if you can make the font bigger and easier to see. The idea of the limited sight is really interesting (it's a little hard for me but I liked the challenge), and the levels are designed just enough to keep the player intrigued and motivated to keep playing. Good job!