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Way more solid than I was expecting

A mini update may be nice, and those who want to wait for the full update can just wait for that release

I legit started tearing up at the scene on the park bench. Outstanding writing, can't wait to see where else this story goes

just replayed and I can confirm that the horror hits REALLY well because I just did not expect it at all. I was half expecting the half ass horror that a lot of porn games do like for their halloween events, but that shit was legit chilling at points because it just hit so raw. 

every time there is a patron exclusive choice that leads to one of the locked scene

Is this still being worked on?

Fantastic start! If I had one piece of constructive criticism, it's that the camera moves really fast during the sex scene and it's really jarring, slow down the camera movements by a lot and the scene will feel much better.

You write such engaging flirtatious dialogue where every character speaks in a distinct way that sells a lot of their character. Very excited to keep reading your work,

Worked perfectly! Thank you!

Started the update and just immediately had the 2 new rooms made, so I never got to see the new Mikosh and Maribel scene

Ah I see the confusion, the second town technically I guess. The inn

she's in the rightmost room at the inn in the first town

Oh shoot I'm dumb then, great!

Happy to hear it! The only other suggestion I would put forward is a gallery feature to revisit H scenes but I'm sure you get that one a lot

Yeah the camera shake needs to be toned down a whole lot. The H scenes are great otherwise

That's amazing to hear honestly!

You had something good with a fun art style, but the sudden switch to the generic AI slop art is jarring and disappointing. Please consider recreating these scenes with your own art because it will be a million times better than it is now.

why the fuck are you on windows 7 in 2024?

Keep going through her quest

My jaw literally dropped when nova spun me around in that last scene, amazing job

it's a quirk in a lot of RPG maker games

C lick on buy

I can also choose to criticize what I see as a low effort and low quality alternative to actually putting in the work. This game could be good but the AI art and voices are so low quality and uncanny valley that it ruins the vision you may have had

I hate what AI is doing to this space

Bruv you get 50 tries. You should have to restart completely if you CAN'T get the star