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my last save seems to have corrupted. do you have one that leave off where the content for the last update ended?

dude has literally been saying "sorry something came up I cant work on the game" every week for nearly a year now. hes lazy and doesnt want to work. last may we were told the first half of chapter 1 would be out soon. well looks like that didnt happen. Also youre confusing making a game from scratch with what this game is. every character model, building, and general asset is premade not by the dev, but by someone else. the dev only puts his creative twist on things but 90% of the "coding" is legit just writing dialogue for this game. 

good game

alright so I finished playing the game and went through every dialogue option available so heres a review and how I think this game can go from good to top tier. 

The story so far is a bit fast paced. for some people thats great, for people like me, I like a slower paced story. Especially after the cat girl was introduced, the nsfw content really picked up. in about 15 minute's of gametime we went from lewd to nude. imo it could be better paced out. Also the beginning is kinda meh, The bully is just kinda there, I think it would be better suited if instead of being harsh and abusive, they instead work to isolate you from others, that would better bring out the idea that the MC is lonely, and the cat girl can improve his traits and the main girl can help bring out his personality

Nsfw scenes are pretty good but as I already stated are a little fast paced. I know you have to deliver something to the fans, but I feel like if you better worked on the campy and light hearted but fun dialogue, you could get away with stretching scene out a bit. But of course maybe add repeatable scenes like peaking the shower in the morning. The one thing that I can really say for sure is please do not add penetration sex so early. A lot of games that do it early make it feel really shoehorned in and make the girls feel like objects. Instead slowly work up to it like in games such as once in a lifetime. 

"dialogue options" look I get it, its a VN, theres only so much you can do, but I feel like youre on the right track, just missing a few things. For example when you first go to wake up the main girl, you can either knock or enter. the best route I found was to knock, then enter, then wisper in her ear. Variety like this didnt exist in much of the other options, so I do hope in the future different dialogue can take you on vastly different paths in an interactions with a character. If theres one thing people hate, its the illusion of choice. 

Overall youre sitting on a good game with the potential to have this become one of the better known VNs, it imo just needs a slower pacing with more dialogue route variety which it seems you intend to add. right now this is a solid 7/10