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Love the characters and illustrations setting the tone of the narratives!c: Wish the sign when you open up the letter will be more visible to guide you to the next space. It was fun to find the key and explore the secrets behind it. Overall, great job! c:

The illustration is nicely done and love the narratives! I was trying on the platform and get the moneybag but was stuck on the platform for some reason. Maybe there will be some indications of how to move forward with the narratives and engage with the fight. Would like to have more options to choose from.

The pixel art is adorable! c: Maybe there can be an indication of how many waffles you collected on the screen, also, adding a navigation of which direction the enemy comes from might help the player better explore the space, overall, it was great! 

Cool game c: I like how the ship could fly around space and shoot the bullets in different directions at the same time.  It gets a bit challenging when multiple planes fly towards the ship, but it is pretty playable. The idea of following the boss ship is fun, overall, great job!

The character and the watercolor-textured illustration are so cute and beautiful! c: I love the way of exploring space and collecting the stars. The light gravity ties to the theme of being in space. I wish I could keep how many stars I collected and not go back to the starting point if reaching outside of the page. Great job!

Love the concept of the game, the interface, narratives, etc. work well with the spooky music, immersive experience! The password inspired me to explore further, seeing these new messages coming out, the pop-up windows, flashing horror symbols, words overlapping, and the eye video in the system making the game scary.  I was scared a bit for the part where “RUN” and the sounds of the door appeared when the screen was black, thought that something might be coming out on the screen. Overall, great work!  c:

Love the concepts, storytelling, fonts, and the color of the words, very cute! The photos bring me to Tokyo/Osaka, giving me a narrative traveling experience. I like how you showcase the money you spent through the journey and help you to make the decision wisely. Maybe there's a system that could tell the player how much it will spend for doing certain things. Overall, very fun! The experience is relatable c:

I like the welcoming opening image with the large bold title and illustration. Maybe there can be more options in the passage to choose from or explore in the descriptions/settings you have.

Love the pixel illustration giving a beautiful setting to the opening. The inventory variable to the stories is very playful, checking the locations/objects back and forth, hidden paranoia, etc. 

Love the faded-in text effects that help follow the stories (someone narrates the stories in a written format) and continue the stories with conversation. Maybe add a setting (sounds of people talking. image of a cafe shop etc.) to the background. 

I like the engaging experience with the unsettled audio in the background bringing you to the system and exploring the system and seeing horror flashing images with sounds. Maybe let the player try to enter the passcode a limited amount of times and the system “log out” or pop up a message/image to let the player click to explore/answer questions etc. Very cool c:

The pixel art is so great! I like the little fox and the shaky cherries. It is a little slippery to control and died a few times, so I come down from the ladder. But it is fun to play around and collect cherries.

I really like the color theme changing at each level. It is cute to start with an NPC interaction and then begin the color journey. I feel a little difficult to jump over some of the obstacles because it will send me back to the level start and I try a few times. Overall, great work!

I like the mechanics and different floor materials in this game. I notice that the number of health will decrease when the bouncing ball hits the bottom of the green floor. It is interesting you set the health number to one hundred. It is fun to play the bouncing around the ball!

The fireball is so adorable! I love the animated emoji on the fireball face. Also, the bouncy material of the floor tiles works well and it is fun to jump around. The music and background are very nice. I think you can add components to trigger something from the “push” box. Overall, I really like the game and it is very cute!

I like the taco truck and the background color. The trunk flips over is so funny! The mechanics work well. I think it will be more fun if you can add components to collect tacos. I have some time to figure out how to let the trunk climb the slope. Overall, I like the theme and it is fun to play. 

I love the little seagull character and the car design. When I play the first time, the seagull encounters the car, there is nothing change. But the second time, I realize that I should help the seagull to avoid crashing the car. Maybe the camera can change to be a little further to see if the car is coming. It is a fun game!

The game is so fun. I love the cat character and the dragon! Also, collecting coins and the setting of nine lives is really fun. I also feel a little difficult to control the character to jump to the next floor. Overall, great work!

The theme is so fun and the music adds effects that providing a vibe to the game. Some of the words are a little difficult to see, maybe it is because the background is a little bit complicated.  I would like to see more endings and more options in this game. Overall, it is still a very playable game!

The simple violet color attracts me a lot! The color palette works well with the game. The game is so cute and it is fun to play. I love the cat! I think you can add some sound effects of the cat and add some cute cat illustrations to the stories. I would like to explore more endings of the game.

The illustrations of the birds are so great! It is a very cool playable game and I like the design of pop-up windows from the words. The story is well-written and the theme is clear. Also, I like the dialogue game format of interaction between the stories and the player. 

The game is very well-made and fun to play. I like the time variables you include in the game and the shaky fonts really effective. The theme is spooky and interesting. It is nice to replay the game and explore different results. 

I like the format of starting with a journey and exploring different options will have different endings.  I enjoyed reading your well-written stories and going forward. The theme and illustration are clear. I think you can add more small illustrations to accompany your amazing stories. 

I like the fonts you choose and the game gives me a feeling of an interactive children's book illustration. The presentation of this game is well-rendered and the theme is clear. I enjoy playing this game. Also, the visuals set nicely with the stories.

It is fun to play to follow along with the stories and make decisions. Adding some visuals will help to add effects to the storytelling. I like those characters and the dialogues in this game.

 It is cute and well-presented. The opening letters offer me to go forward to different places to experience.  I like the little visuals you created that make me want to explore more.

The theme is clear and I like the visuals you created that make me step into the story. The game format of talking to the characters and seeing different personalities works well.  And I like the expression changes on the character's face that matches with the stories. 

The welcoming page let me engage in the game directly. It is a cute game and the theme is clear. I am very engaged in playing the game by answering the questions several times and finding different results. Also, the sound is fun to hear and adds a lot of effects to the game. 

The presentation of the game is well-rendered with nice visuals and funny questions. The theme is cute and attractive. I am very engaged to play this game to choose different contestants and it is fun to see the results.  Very Nice!