Hello there. I'm actually reworking this one. At the moment I can only make a little progress at a time, but whenever I can I do what I can. I have several other visual novel projects that I want to work on, and I plan on completing them.
Thanks for playing. Feel free to follow me to stay up to date with upcoming updates. (◕ᴗ◕✿)
I do not know what to say. This VN makes me have feelings. Feelings that for some reason I just don't feel in real life. I love VNs like this. This one in particular caught me off guard. This escape from reality took me back to it, in a painful and bittersweet way. But that's how I want to feel. I want to feel something. Thank you so much for this.
This is a well-written visual novel. It's is very light, casual and without many worries. It's the kind of utopian fantasy that's good to come into contact with every now and then.
One of the best vns I've ever read. The writing is good and the arts are very charismatic. The songs are also great, it fits well with the atmosphere. There's only one thing that bothered me while reading, but it didn't bother me that much. In the Android version, I don't know about the others, there seems to be a problem with the text box, it only contains three lines of dialogue and the rest is off screen. I don't know if it's because of my cell phone or what, but either way it doesn't interfere much with understanding the story.
Well, anyway, good work and thanks for your work and those involved.
Yes, but it's part of something that I find very interesting. AI-generated images are empty, soulless, insignificant and worthless, just like the world itself. But, just like the world itself, there are those who are unique, who have life, people, who are capable of giving meaning to the meaningless, they are not generated by AI, they have a soul, and because they are with you in a gray world, it becomes a little more colorful.
Hello there. Heh, I was quite surprised by this but you can feel free to translate, I'm glad you're interested in my project. I just have to say that the game is on hiatus until a few years from now, so it will take a while for an update to come out, but if you want it, I'd appreciate it.
Ahoy, so um conselho que eu acho q pode te ajudar. Nessa versão em inglês, coloca o preço em dollar ou euro, pode ajudar as outras pessoas a terem uma noção melhor de quanto você tá cobrando
Oh wow, that's a lot of plans. I'm glad you're working so hard, it's comforting to see someone so hard working. And congratulations on the progress of the visual novel so far, I really enjoyed reading it. And one important thing, I wish you good luck with everything you are going through, certainly not getting a concrete diagnosis about your problems and living in an unhealthy home are serious things and must be handled with care, so I'm going to make a selfish request: your life is yours to live, don't let angry readers make you change your story, don't let bad reviews make you think badly about the quality of your work, and don't let yourself suffer for something you're not to blame for. Your life is yours to live, if you just want to become an ordinary salaryman and live an ordinary life, do that, If you want to be, I don't know, the owner of a chain of underwater casinos, do that, but do whatever you want to do for yourself. A life is more time than necessary but less than ideal, so make it your life. Be your protagonist. Face adversity as you see fit, just don't let it get in the way of your life.
Sigh, I think I got the message across but sorry if it's a bit confusing. Well, take care, good luck.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I understand your concerns about the number of characters in my visual novel. I'm aware that developing multiple love interests in a short period of time can be challenging, but I'm working hard to ensure that each character is well-developed and that their stories integrate cohesively.
Oh, and when I referred to 'a few hours to read', I was considering an average of 4 to 7 hours of reading on each route (Which I consider not to be much). If you have more insights or suggestions, I would be happy to hear them!
Yes, but not for now, my time is very short, so maybe in a few months I'll release an update. But in the short time I have, I'm trying to improve my writing skills and maybe learn to draw.
Thank you very much for your words, I am so grateful that you took the time to write so much. I don't even know where to start.
Well, about the other comments, u don't need to worry about it. I'm not alone in this world, there are people who agree and disagree with me. But that's part of life, all I can do is keep my head up and keep going, maybe with a few bruises but not giving up. About Ford's sprite, I did have some help, my brother and a friend helped me build it but they told me not to mention them, which I don't think would do much good, but they don't post drawings on their social media anyway.
And here I see I haven't answered all the things I think you might want to know. Overall, everything you said is fact, and I appreciate you telling me where I can improve and for your understanding of my situation. I'll do my best.
And good news, I'm now on that one week off from one of my schools, and I'm using this time to study more about art, writing, design, etc., even if for a small period of time, to improve in vn creation.
Well, again I thank you for coming here. You have no idea how good and relieving it is to read such an affectionate comment.
Hello there, thanks for answer me and for your advice, I'll do my best to make my writing better. I really appreciate you taking the time to write to me. And about the 'Have a good life' thing, I'm really sorry if it sounded like that. I have used this sentence for years and it never caused any trouble for me or anyone. Thanks a lot for your advices.
Ahoy, thanks a lot for playing and leaving your comment. I really understand where your comment comes from, and it's probably because English is not my native, although I'm am fluent, mistakes are expected. Also, if u don't mid to give me a few seconds of ur day, can u tell me my mistakes? After all, learn my mistakes is the first step to get better.
