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It would be cool to see more in this universe itself definitely :) 

Oh weird, not sure how it did that lol 

Yeah I see what you mean, makes him more of a side / background char in ways otherwise. I think he had some understanding, if i recall (been awhile since I read) he picks him up after he meets with his mom at the diner and it's kinda like he knows that he just experienced what he had known for years. So felt more like a silent understanding scenario

thattttttt's the one

Yeah that was boring af. The game was mainly turning on and off lights...also this exact house layout was used in another horror game I'm pretty sure. 

Holy shit, great stuff! Everything you write is chefs kiss👌👌Keep it up! 🩵🏳️‍🌈

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I agree that would've been nice, and the third perspective would've helped the situation too so Callum didn't have it feel so one sided. Love Baxter though as well, Marcus is cute and has his moments, but feels like he has a bit more obvious flaws to him. I remember in WiFL Baxter said he owed Callum a favor, and I think that's what got him to go back before the wedding to fix things, so while they deff had their moments in this, I was hoping to see more close interactions between the two of them to give us that sense of closeness as friends more than just casual friends, but doing all that would've definitely made it longer lol And course! Great story so happy to talk about it with someone who shares similar feelings :3

Ahh no worries! Happy to discuss the story as it's still super fresh for me and I have no irl furry friends so xD 

1. Yeah this is deff valid, like by the end he's basically just hated by everyone it felt like as if he's just supposed to take their word for it and forget about David completely and move on, which isn't realistic at all when they were together as long as they were and childhood sweethearts. 

2. Yeah I was kind of hoping for a discussion where he questioned why they felt like locking him in the classroom and calling the cops was justified. I assume it would've been similar to how Baxter felt and reacted, so bringing it back up would've killed their getting back together. Ik it was mentioned multiple times Marcus's overly protective nature, so it deff goes back to that for sure, but I think he underestimated the importance David had to him and even held it against him when they break up. I get feeling betrayed, but if he were David in that situation then he would've expected Callum to react the same way and to still care for him, but demonizes Callum for feeling how he is. Everyone has their good and bad traits though as they're only human, so that's deff part of Marcus for sure. 

3.Lmao funny u say that about cus for Smoke  legit thought he was going to be this big ass tough guy, like the dialogue had even joked like "that's it?" and it's some cracked out old rabbit lmao but he really just was the head of the group and that was it. I am glad it didn't go into this whole oh no Callum is kidnapped, Marcus needs to save the day! Kinda trope, bc that would've felt a bit stereotypical i feel like for the almost perfect bf Marcus comes off as lol Troy was great, I would love a little side adventure with him or more about him being ace and how he felt kinda being third wheel to the group as they grow into who they are even though he acts chill most of the time. Seeing him and Callum's relationship together is so sweet and his true side that I would've loved to see more of. For me I think Lupe is that char for me, she drove Callum on the quest he was on, but her not getting any resolution when she started the driving plot seemed odd. In my head I hope David visited her on the way out of town, but I feel like he truly thought it was easier for her if he didn't show back up just to leave again, reopening an unclosed wound. 

4. I can see that for sure, I feel like endings are the hardest bits of stories and you don't want to drag things out. I worried it would turn into some standoff thing when David showed up at the door so I'm glad it was kind a quick no I'm done, like Callum truly came to terms that there was no future for them and Marcus was his bf now and that was that. 

Great story, this and What it Feels Like are so well done. Can't wait to see what's next :3 

Yeah it's sad. I think allot of that was for Callum to fully move on he really needed to fully let him go, and with his situation he couldn't just stay there like nothing happened, so feels like it was a all or nothing kinda scenario sadly :/

I was curious to see if they let Lupe know what happened near the end with David or if he went to see her. When I Knew You is a nice follow up to this though, I read that first so it feels nice getting to learn about Callum and Marcus with having just saw them at the end of that one.

A sweet story and it was nice getting to see their relationship coming from What it Feels Like and seeing them there at the end, but also getting to learn about Baxter's younger years as well. Really enjoy your writing style, super playful at times, while deep during other moments. With the backdrops + soundtrack it's a nice chill experience too :) 

Bro I stg, maga furries make literally no sense. Pretending like the evil dictator is ok with them, until he isn't and we're all demonized for just existing. People need to wake TF up. 

This was so well done. Some genuine touching moments, emotional rollercoaster keeping you hooked until the end, nice chill vibes, and a dope soundtrack. Loved it 👌

Awesome job so far! Enjoying the ties to the OG game and getting to see some of the cast, and the cutscenes are really well done. Can't wait to see what's next :3

So goooooooodddd. Can't wait for more :3 <3

A great companion experience to IMG. Has a really nice feel to it even given some of the sad moments of it. It's nice getting to learn more about this lovable floof <3 The unfinished art doesn't tarnish the experience at all either. Great job :3

Ooh Dante's Inferno layers corresponding to punch holes could be interesting, then it could get into a bit of like the Saw films where Jigsaw was watching them and gathered those he thought needed to learn a lesson and all that. So i think ur deff onto something there! 

Especially thinking of the idea it mirrors The Menu with Jack either A. ruining plans, B. being one to either help the others through potential trials to come (If it ends up like Saw and they represent a different sin) or C. showing The Showmaster that there are some who can appreciate art for what it is and see it's parallels to real life. 

Awesome theory crafting there. Can't wait to see what comes next :3 

This was so good T___T I fear this will leave a hole in my heart like reading Echo for the first time did. Amazing job, can't wait to read your other works and see where you go from here. Keep it up! 🩵

Great start to the story! The opening made me :o and then had another one later on lmao Look forward to what's coming next! 

I'm not seeing anything underneath the comments unless I'm missing something? That's an interesting theory though for the cast, that would be pretty cool if u nailed it lol 

I didn't see a year given to show when it takes place, and there hasn't been mention of cellphones. So that + there being no exits I'm assuming there's no way for them to reach anyone, yet/if at all lol

And you know...do the thing...that kitty was talking about wishing he could experience...👀👀🤣

Super cute! Love the voicework, adds allot to the experience! Colby is so adorable :3

Just finished both routes, can't wait to see what else you have planned for the characters! 🥰

Aww v cute and nice voicework 😉👌

That was nostalgic in all the right ways 😉 and the other endings were nice, a good amount of story in a little package 🥰

Cute idea! Aero is adorable :3