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I can see your intentions from the games you make, and I can see that you want to make a fun game for the players.

I can feel that you are very serious about designing game levels, but I have a small suggestion. I think it would be better to hide the mouse cursor during gameplay, so as not to distract players and provide them with a more immersive gaming experience

User experience principle: Gameplay

Your game is somewhat challenging, and as levels progress, the difficulty gradually increases, which can increase player engagement and long-term game value. In addition, the unique design of enemies in the game brings players different challenges and fun.

However, in terms of gameplay, you can consider adding some additional game elements to enrich the player's gaming experience. For example, tasks that hide levels or unlock special rewards can be added, which can attract players to explore the game world more deeply and increase the playability and replay value of the game.

In addition to the traditional click operation, consider supporting keyboard operation and touch screen input to adapt to different user habits and devices.

The floating effect achieved by changing the tension of the rigid body is very in line with the space theme, and most of the functions have already been implemented.

I think the story is excellent and there is nothing that needs improvement, so I give it a 10.

I think the work is beautifully made and the painting style is excellent

 The UX and UI both are very good!

Here are four simple questions:

1.Can my story book attract children to watch it?

Your storybook is very attractive in visual design, and the plot is simple and interesting, which is likely to be quite attractive among children. 2. Is the story book simple and easy to understand for children? 

Your storybook is very concise and easy to understand, with vivid and interesting language expression. The storyline has also been carefully designed, allowing children to easily understand and participate in it. 3. Does the storybook conform to the principle of user experience? 

The overall design of the storybook conforms to the principles of user experience, with fast page loading speed, simple and easy-to use interface design, and reasonable functional layout, which meets the usage habits and experience needs of children. 4. Is there anything that can be improved in my story book?

In terms of storyline design, you can further enrich the details, explore deeper emotional connotations, and make the story more inspiring.

Briefly, how would you describe your overall experience with the e-book?

The content of e-books is attractive, and the storyline is concise and interesting, making it easy to attract readers' attention and make them happy to participate.

Images such as the game interface and character avatars usually show a variety of funny plants and funny zombies to make an impression.

4.Please evaluate the simplicity and fluency of story display and page switching?

The simplicity and fluency of story display and page switching are excellent. The text is clear and easy to read, and the transitions between pages are smooth. It enhances the overall reading experience, ensuring that readers can focus on the story without distractions or difficulties in navigation.

2.Do you think the text of this storybook is easy to distinguish and the animation is smooth?

The text in the storybook is very easy to recognize, and the font size and color selection make reading enjoyable. The animation effect is also very smooth, increasing interactivity and children's sense of participation.