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I MADE AN ACCOUNT JUST TO WRITE THIS. Now I DON'T KNOW WHAT CRACK YOU PUT IN THE STORY BUT I WANT YOUR WHOLE STOCK. I'll be real honest. I've been avoiding this story for a bit; I can't even tell you why. Im half regretful and half happy I waited this long just so I could binge to chapter seven. THE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN MC AND THEIR MOTHER had me screaming. I was literally arguing with her out loud like the game could hear me. You really did so well in making her infuriating and pitiful. There were certain moments I found myself wanting to reunite just for her to do some stupid shit and make me go right back to hating her. [SPOILERS] When she literally offered to meet her new family I was about to bite a chair out of anger. I just found it absolutely egregiously absurd you would even do that. SHE HAD SO MANY OPTIONS TO MEET MC, Im not taking any of her excuses except for the intercepted letters. And to think she made a new family, I truly feel in my heart she had no intention of getting me, she had her new life and she was all happy. She clearly never intended to look for MC if you had a whole kid and husband at home. I think genuinely thats what made me angrier. It also didn't help when I decided to talk to Rana ONLY, that Danzor had the nerve to speak up, saying stuff like "You shouldn't talk to your mother like that, can't you see she's trying." OOOHHHHH he was getting me mad. THIS IS NOT YOUR BUSINESS SIR MIND YOUR BUSINESS I DIDNT EVEN WANT TO TALK TO YOUR ASS SMH. I was veryyyyy bitter, Ive never had such a visceral reaction come out in a choose your own adventure novel. The way I saw the situation; it was a happily ever after for Salyra. She got married to her childhood crush, had a baby out of love, and is a well respected priestess on the island she was raised. She had no intention of raising MC like that and that's what's worse. Seeing Rana get absolutely coddled by both Danzor and Salyra had me absolutely furious. Every time they mentioned she was a blessing I just got more salty. THE MC WASN'T EVEN MADE BECAUSE SALYRA WANTED TO LOVE HER CHILD SHE DID IT SO IT COULD  BE A SYMBOL, AN ENTITY NOT A PERSON. I will not forgive her and I will take every opportunity to spite her from now on. Elora was the absolute cutest, I loved romancing her but I also loved being her friend, Every character was great and I loved it. Thank you so much for writing this fantastic story. I can not wait for future updates and cant wait until its completed so I can officially buy the game. (Im hoping that the AI art gets replaced with something with a bit more pizzaz) ONCE AGAIN THANK YOU IM GOING TO BE THINKING ABOUT THIS PLOT ALL WEEK.