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Girl, that was so messy ajsjsjsjsj and ok is the last instalment so i´ll elaborate

Honestly props to you for this idea, is very creative and unique and i can see this being quite the challenge to come up with plotlines and storybeats so easily

But baby that was the biggest flaw XD

like you could introduce some interesting plot point for a character ONLY FOR IT TO GO TO WASTE WHEN THEY GOT VOTED OFF AT THE NEXT EPISODE, it's not entirely your fault BUT GIRL

And some characters were way more fleshed out than others because of that and 

The biggest murder you did to me was to my girl Naya like by the end WHO IS SHE LIKE REALLY?

i loved her i  wanted her to be in the finals with Ravi but when (i think Yazmin?) said that final would be boring i knew i was cooked xd

But what did you do to Naya girl? she went the same path as Memphys by the end AND SHE WAS REWARDED WTFFFF????

Im ok with her playing Yazmin, even Memphys and Jacinto at the end

BUT WHY RAVI???????

And in the penultimate episode I couldn't be shocked pikachu face that she played her only reminding friend only to bite her in the ass because she just got rid of her only ally (like omg my actions have consequences?? who would've guessed??? ) BECAUSE OF ALL THE STUFF WITH RAINBOW

And im not excusing Rainbow turning on her because she thru their collective friend under the bus is understandable, but physically assaulting her is unjustifiable.

But girl that was plot convenient as all hell wtf, i mean its believable but why would you do that?

If you wanted to write a story that covers themes such as those you sit with them and explore them tactfully, not for plot convenience and to brush them off without any lasting consequences 

Like you wanted to portray that as Naya choosing to stay because she is "strong now"? but now Naya being in the finally feels completely unearn and hollow

She deceived people, she turned against her remaining friend, but im supposed to just be on her side now?

AND SHE WAS SO SWEET UNTIL THIS POINT, i knooooow her character growth is to be more confident and to know how to be strategic BUT YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO MAKE HER MEMPHYS TWO?!?!

All the things they slandered Memphys in the finale could be applicable to Naya, it's just that Memphys did it the longest, BUT IS MEMPHYS THE ONE WHO REFLECTS ON HIS ACTIONS??? I knew he could and it is kinda sweet to see some glimpses that he will hopefully know better next time (and the veeery end but oh well) BUT NAYA GOES UNSCATHED BY THE SLANDER????

Naya I want to love you so bad but no one acknowledged the shit she pulled, and when Ravi trashed talked Memphys (super earned) he really didn't say shit to Naya??? like at all? so everything cruel Memphys does is acknowledged but for Naya is forgotten and rewarded go iiiiiiiiiit

And Rainbow he's just in the background now, no closure for neither i guess

If you read this far I know dragging on the finale is not quite the look for appreciation, but i do love this novel.

it was so creative!, so funny, trashy, raunchy, sentimental and messy and well, i kept reading.

The opposite of love is not hate is indifference.

i truly hope you polish your work because it is consistently amazing and i hope we can see this characters again (this is said copingly to see if you can fix their dynamics please please please)

I loved Yazmin i think her arc is the gem of the novel by far you can clearly see she is a kind empathetic person that let´s the performance get to her head and you can see her moral conflict of whether do the right thing or the thing that´ll make her win all because she put all her self worth into being a winner into being the best for the audience, and i liked she still performs to the audience but in the end she reflects the only one she needs to please is herself whether or not she can fully commit to be genuily selfasured is yet to be seen but she was a delight to decifer to the very end.

Will be expecting your next novel eagerly but don't force yourself girl rest if you need to, take care, reflect, don't be too hard on yourself and recognize you made something good here, waaaaaaay better than some shitty ai fruits ever could

anyways

i love you, thank you, fuck you, bye

Hi, can someone help me find the bunny and jotun? also whats the code for the chest near gamble?

where do i need to chisel? i dont know what's a gutter

who is Batelroch??????

hey btw im also missing one sleep option is the one below Sleeping with miles

No prob, Thank you!

Hey im still missing a device and some toys for the toys are the firts two the one above the "canine fleshlight" and the "Portal fleshlight", and for the device im missing the second one just above use "hypno device" and right from "stream it" can someone tell me where to find it?

thank you!

how do you get help from the lunesians? im having so much trouble with them

how do you find mochi and syd´s gym scene?

how do you find mochi and syd´s gym scene?

Hey bb so i just find the secret scene and all i gotta say is:

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ON MY HANDS AND KNEES IM BEGGING YOU AD MORE CGs TO IT IVE NEVER WITNESS ANYTHING HOTTER EXPAND UPON IT PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE

ok so old saves dont work at all but the content is still availave if you start from the begining

hey so ther's an error that dosent let me progress to see pauls new update

having the library spot hidden in a screen i didnt know was scrollable is evil

OOOOOh i didn't saw that thank you!

Hey so i wanted to try not dying but i have to die 2 times in Laard, so is that the case or is there a way to avoid it?

Hello! it´s me again!, i Finally got to the point i have Oliver back at my ship :,D!

And it´s STILL THE SAME :,,,,,,,,,,,,,,D!

is there a puzzle with the crowns? and what do you do with them?

This was so fu!

ucking depressing man, goddamit

true to the genre everyone here lacks braincells in astonishing levels

(spoilers)

JUSTICE FOR JOY HOMEGIRL DESERVED BETTER, and sorry i was laughing at the end MC been reading to much dark novels AND STILL HAS STANDARDS ABOUT IT???? gurl please

ok voy a admitir que no le esperaba nada pero me acabo gustando mucho espero si la continues, por que hasta el Wanderer fue el unico que me cayó bien??? no se si es como peniwise y se come todo o si tiene un codigo moral y va tras los homofobicos, me gusta mas la segunda pero quiero ver como desarrollas esta idea esperaré leerlo con ansias :3

ok i lost my saves so i´ll try again but i did had oliver on board at the moment of the question

hey when i go to sleep under summon Miles i´m missing something can you tell me how to get it?

I get it yet i´ll miss seeing a muscle wall of a man get sassed around by an older lady, dare i say, very latino coded experience

Look, i have to be honest i'd love to continue readying tooth, when i read it i was in highschool and funnily the storyline you said you hated the most was the one that resonated with me (the lion) i had a crush on a straight bro and kinda had the same dynamic, and your game was a little respite from that, now i´m older and i´d love to see him with new eyes, but not at the cost of you, VN´s come and go, i´m still sad that they cancelled brave paradise(AND I CANT PLAY IT NO MORE ::::::n::::::) but i loved those characters, they acompanied me for a while and made me feel less alone, please continue if you feel is a good choice but if it starts hurting you again, it would hurt me more, to see you hurting yourself, it´ll make me sad to see them go again but  i´ll always cherish the time spend with the tooth roster  but just as them, we have to move on, and hey if you go ahead and write something new i´ll welcome it with open arms, i hope you heal, get better, and get some awsome friends.

Ni modo tocará ser madrastra a los 21 xd 

and on a side note when mr muerte says ¨no te vayas a chismear¨ is wrong is ´no  vayas a chismear¨ in any case it would be "no vayas tu a chismear" also because he´s talking to an older lady he might use "usted" is a more formal/respectful way to adress someone so it would be "no vaya (usted, is implied) a chismear" only taking out the "s"

I loved this game!, i would have liked to talk more to brooke or the teacher and the student, or even meet the hubbie but over all it´s a pretty great game

So in the end he didn´t block us he just (long ghosted) us xd

EVERYBODY SHUT UP MY GOAT IS BACK

Honestly, yeah, tho the self reflection to realize Xavier isn´t gulty just goes so far, he still needs some growing to feel any remorse over his actions towards Xavier, to me his thinking in the interlude is more of a "yeah maybe i blamed Xavier for no reason, oppsie my bad" in contrast to show any care or  remorse over what he caused to Xavier or over him as a person.

or this one

this one

oh so is there gonna be a new build for eric :3?

wait if this is the last one what about the eric hangout that says in a future build?

i admire you

just found the novel and i loved it ill be waiting

And *spoilers*

HE DOSENT FEEL GUILTY FOR XAVIER, ONLY CYRUS, in his monologue where he's reflecting on the close people he hurted HE NEVER MENTIONS XAVIER  that made me so mad this mf really is something else

nah i think is good to have hope for him is a good virtue, i see the option for a good person to bloom from him too, but it´s important to keep in mind who you want a person to be, who they could be, and who they are up to this point, can be very diferent