first visual novel i've read from you; i'm coming over from the recently-finished toxic yuri VN jam after being unsatisfied with the levels of toxicity present.
you have a keen sense for non-sequitur psychosis-pattern-matching prose and fortunately/unfortunately an equally keen sense for desperate misery. eminently readable the whole way through. great use of the medium, i was especially fond of the narration back-and-forth jumping w/ accompanying cues in the final scene. title cards, borders, and sidebar sprites (something i haven't seen before -- i quite like it! i'm often tired of the bouncy PNGtuber ren'py default) were charming and fun. excellent work
to speak on the actual narrative content of the vn: Good lord. Five stars