To be honest, yeah, the game has a character problem in the story right now. I still cannot find a good way to fit hypnosis into it without making it feel like rape. I want to keep it romantic and let it progress naturally, but I also do not want to bore players with walls of text.
I am getting better and better as I keep writing, but the story changes a lot during the process. I end up changing many parts while writing and even while coding them, and that is one of the main reasons updates take so long.
After the Pixie part, I am thinking about fully separating the routes. NTR, sub, dom, hypno/control, and the other themes would each have their own story instead of all being forced into the same one.
Thanks a lot for the comment, though <3