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I like the game and all the controls works fine.  May be you should make a better intro page and better sprites with a consistent theme.  May be you can also add a timer to make the game more exciting.  Overall the game looks fine and i enjoyed playing it.  May be you should add more game mechanics to make the game more enjoyable.

First I wanna congratulate for making such a good game. This is one of the best designed and executed game i have come across.The introduction scene is well done. You don't have an exit button that takes you to the intro scene. The player doesn't hold the wand right now. It would be great if the players hold the wand. When you make the player colorful, may be you should also make the background and sprites colorful. You should come up with a better theme that is consistent through the game. Controls are fine and works well. I think you should have an instructions page which explain how to play the game.

I think you should change the background sound. The reason we play games is for fun and to relax. The  background sound is not so energetic and doesn't suit well for games. You should also work on making better sprites and graphics, may be a bit colorful. The concept is good but instead of shooting the enemies with cheese, may be you should make the mouse shoot some kind of a power through its mouth. Everything else is fine.

All the sprites are really good. The background sound fits well to the game. The concept is unique and you have executed it well. This concept can be turned into a VR game. "Notice of Termination" suits the theme. This is a really good example of designing the entire game in the same theme.  

However there are some minor things you should look into.  You should try adding additional sounds for the player. If you want to make the office large, if you can add a mini map that would be great.