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That makes a lot more sense! I know it's really hard to fit that all in with the word limit! I don't know if it's allowed, but a link or something to the previous chapters or parts would be super helpful!

Great moodboard. Would have liked it to be a little bit more obvious what the dutchies' things were and some fun lizard man dialogue. Overall, very fun!

I like Lord Blackvayne, but it's a little unclear to me why Tilda did what she did.

Good story, but pretty linear. Could use some more ups and downs.

Interesting mysteries being set up, but I need a bit more than just talking for a story personally. It's hard for me to grasp tone and relationships without a few more descriptions and/or actions.

Great story. Love to jump right into the action at the start