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liked the narration and it’s a feeling we all have. Nothing is perfect and how to balance competing interests. I didn’t feel like there were consequences for my choices though. Maybe track the first choice and make the endings dependent on what people chose first. Overall, good job. 

hit the theme well. I didn’t feel like my choices had much consequence. 

good story and use of the theme. You also win the award for the most writers. Also the art is beautiful. I played on my phone. Only suggestion is to make everything resize better for mobile devices.