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Valakas99

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I love this concept for a game, and the art style has a kind of charm to it that I enjoy. Maybe some of the art could be refined a little bit, but the style is great. However, there are some things that are really holding this game back that I hope the developer would be willing to address. I'll try going from most important to least important.

1. The gameplay loop at the factory is very boring. The occasional bot talking to you is really creepy and interesting, but every other aspect is dreadful. When you understand what to do the only steps to follow are to check the first screen for red text and then analyze the third screen and wait to see if any red text appears. There isn't any kind of thought process to it and I felt like a zombie when it got to three different lines because there is no challenge. I think having errors be in red text is a mistake. I don't read any of it and I certainly don't double check that the actual bot in the box matches the description. Force me to actually take the time to double check text and images to make sure it is correct. Papers, Please would be great inspiration for that.

2. The grind for money is a slog. If the gameplay at the factory was more engaging I could endure through it, but I reached a point where I had to complete 3-4 days of work with no engagement in the game to unlock the next bot to buy. This is even worse when you realize that to progress the story and go to the bar you need to leave work early which will cut down on your revenue.


3. I feel like sex points are given out too much and the sex animations are too long. I never, at any point, had to wait to unlock a new position because I had thousands of SP before even unlocking my first bot. It would be nice to have to actually save those up and spend them on the bot you enjoy the most. Also, the sex animations take too long with no engagement for a necessary game mechanic. You have to do them over and over again if you want enough energy to work effectively mid and late game, but I'm forced to do nothing and watch during the animation. It feels like it takes forever, and when you finish work with 9+ energy you have to sit through it that many times. It's brutal.

Again, I really like this idea for a game and it has serious potential. I'm gonna check in on it every now and then because I've been waiting for a lewd "Papers, Please" type game for a long time and this is that game. Please take that criticism as critique and not hate. Good work with what you have done and I hope to see more from this game 

This just screams of malware. PC warned me against downloading and there was zero game to speak of. This should really get removed from Itch.io

You really had to make the main character as cringe edgy as you possibly could