So I started with Donnovan because I planned to play strategically -> It’s easier to go around the rules with a cop in your pocket right ? Loved his first reaction being such a real no ah, ah, ah. And the warning from MC’s uncle was so telling for the rest of the story, we really need to be careful on this route.
For Vince I thought he was the most safe and at the same time I wanted to keep an eye on him. Will he really not take the business from us ? His different reactions to our choices was interesting and at the same time, not sure we really like the implications when we ask him about the investigation. Is it what he thinks about MC or is he just really worried about Mc’s uncle ? Bit at least there is loyalty to the Uncle and to the business. Real nice cliffhanger before the next chapter !
One little problem and not one actually : in episode 1 when they are in the car there are 2 lines one on the other and the two begin with : Couldn’t find file… But it gives no problem since it’s purple on purple so almost not visible and we actually have a background, it’s not all black. I’m not sure it’s something that should be fixed.
Gerald or Gerry loved the mysterious atmosphere and learning little clues around. It was really nice to see the other boys so relaxed and learning more about what they did day 1 than what they are telling on their own route. I have to say it’s probably one of the more spoilers route but I’m really hooked, the pace was really nice.
One thing : The girl (Bea) Elliot introduced to us has the face really low. Like the lips on the neck and eyes around there the nose should be. It was weird to see especially when she is describes as attractive. And when we have a zoom on her face it’s all on the left on the background. Same problem with Lynch’s face being all on the left when we’re talking.
Another one on Gerry’s route : Couldn’t find file ‘Background/mansion_ballromm_day_v1.jpg’ so the background at the end of the episode is all black.
I ended up with Cliff because he has the more chapters. Wait ? Mabel ? Will we meet Mabel ? I’m not gonna say more because… There were a lot more chapters than what I thought. I got until epilogue 3 and I don’t want to spoil accidentally.
One thing : in episode 1 after the first choice when arriving at the bar Cliff and Andrew are superposing. Then when they are still one over the other Andrew lost his hat. Then in episode 2 at the amusement park after the choice there is a moment when Cliff’s hat disappears too before reappearing. Pretty funny ~.
The only typo I saw in the game so bravo at the end of the conversation with Leslie (episode 4) : T’ll send you another letter…
In episode 7 after choice when talking with Cliff : Image ‘sad’ not found.
The number 2 typo in episode 10 : ”Nobody gave a rat if we was happy or not.” It’s were.
2 typos in epilogue 3, I’m not sure it’s typos : qunnin’ for gunnin’ is my guess & the other lathe instead of lather.
Funny how our MC next morning is not wearing the same thing, it’s easy for players to get deeper in the stories. I loved the little things you learn about other characters in every route. It made me really curious about some and wary about others. I’m curious to read more and discover more about them and the universe.
Information : The web version is missing now on the itch.io page. Maybe it’s too much data for itch.io ?
And I can erase some bugs to avoid people reading about some spoils if need.