So far the story is good just wish there was a little bit more excitement in it. One thing that i do want to point out is that you used images from Harry Potter. For instance when Ramos and the main character are shipwrecked and find the small town, the brown haired woman's house is Ronald Weasley's house. Even though you distorted the image, you still used a image that could have copyright to it.
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