I liked this game! It was a fun twist on a pretty familiar formula. I enjoyed the two endings, too- and because the game is so short, it's no problem to replay it and get them both for full context.
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Really like this game! Short but sweet, implies a lot by saying a little. It reminds me of old video game creepypasta but in a good way- no unnecessary gore and random elements that don't make sense, just the good, horrible question: what if you were the one standing on your porch forever, telling the actual player to find your apples? Good job!
You are actually one of my favorite writers of all time. Seeing your growth between Ch1 and Ch2 of Bad Enders is incredibly inspiring- you went from good to great, in my opinion. I'm super invested in whatever stories you have to tell. Each of them have your cynical wit and wry hope (for lack of a better word) in their own refreshing way, and all of them have concepts that immediately draw the reader in and keep them flipping pages.
Your voice and artistic style (both in terms of the writing and art) is incredibly strong, dry enough to sell even the most outlandish of concepts in a realistic way that makes the reader compelled by even the most bizarre characters. It's something I hope to be able to emulate in my own writing someday. I really hope you keep writing and drawing, and I hope I will be able to keep reading what you make.
[Spoilers] I liked this game a lot, and I really liked the way it controlled. I know not everyone was a fan, but it reminded me of Silent Hill, not to mention the fact that the way you have to be constantly aware of where she is pointed and how you will get to wherever you want to get to adds to the tenseness for me. For most of the game, I was constantly checking on the box in the courtyard to make sure I knew exactly where it was and how to get to it- the same thing with being able to go behind the shower curtain in the house. The cutesy artstyle meshes well with the themes, too- I like how she "lost her cartoon" and how sad she looks as compared to literally everyone else in the game. It alludes to a larger overall story which I am a fan of, and I like that we don't really get to know it- leaves the audience guessing.