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TrowaBarton1455

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Is there a new walkthrough that is up to 4.3?

The game isn't too bad. Should really be able to rename the main character though. Also, could really use a native English speaker to run through and edit the text so that it doesn't sound so.. I won't say Google/machine translated, because it's not that bad, but it could really use a native speaker's touch.


Other than that, I like the game.

I don't know. I do find the MC a bit annoying, really. He definitely hides his feelings and self-security behind a wall of humor, especially when things get too serious or heartfelt. I mean, at first, it's fine. But after time in the story and healing from his past, it could show the MC maturing as a person instead of never changing at all. And I do agree a bit, the characters can be a bit one dimensional. They don't really change or evolve much and stay to their one scripted roll in the story. The biggest ones that do change some are Lucy and Tanya, mainly because their backstories were pretty heavy.

I mentioned this before to you lol. Half-siblings are still very much related. Yeah, if, say a half-brother and half-sister have a child, there's less chance to have a child with deformities or issues, but there's still a higher chance. They still share half the DNA from one parent. Which makes them 100% related. It's not like step-siblings, where they are only related by marriage and have no blood relation.

So just imagine that your own father or your own mother had a child with another woman or man. Would you not consider them properly related to you just because the child doesn't have both the same father and mother as you?

Not a bad game. Animations were a bit clunky and some of the renders were a bit weird, but story was fine. Not sure what is up with a lot of developers making MCs or other characters into booze hounds though and constantly trying to drink.

Probably just a model used for the game, not an actual dish. The developer probably has a lack of food models to use in the game (like many of the other VNs), so they use what they have available (or find funny). Like the running gag in this game with pancakes. There's literally no one alive who could eat pancakes literally everyday for multiple meals and be fine or not grow tired of it after a while lol.

Same goes with the steak and potatoes for breakfast they had one time. Just used what was available instead of finding/making a bacon and eggs model to use.

Right? They may find it cute and nice at first, thinking he's funny and makes them laugh. But as time goes on and years pass by, his women are going to never tell him anything serious ever again and slowly, or quickly, find him annoying and start avoiding him because the MC can't take anything seriously without making jokes all the time. Super annoying. There's a time and place for jokes and humor. Not all the time.

It's a bit.. Jarring. There's no build up or anything, it's rough. But it is fun. Though going forward, I'd definitely suggest getting a proofreader or a native English speaker to go through your dialogue and fix it all. The way it is now, the English has many grammatical errors and isn't natural at all. There's a lot of things that a native speaker just wouldn't say, or at least not the way it's written.

I liked the game but for how much content is in it for public release, it's kinda meh. I also don't like how there's a "relationship" bar for different characters and it's pretty much pointless for what's in it so far. Also kinda meh that basically, it's only mother/son or father/daughter relationships. It's not even moving towards being able to have a brother/sister relationship basically. It all revolves around those two relationships.

I see that this game has apparently died. Last post even on Patreon was April 2020.

This game is really amazing. Even though it's pretty short in terms of game play, which is understandable due to it's not far into development, I truly enjoyed it. The plot is really intriguing, the characters are well done, and the mechanics are a nice touch, even if a bit simple, especially for a non-Japanese "eroge," since that's what you call this. Not to mention that the graphics/renders are truly beautiful, especially compared to a lot of other adult visual novel games. The animated scenes are one of the best I've seen as well from this genre.

So, double thumbs up! I really can't wait for more progress for the game.

Haha, sorry. I wasn't trying to be insulting or anything. English was one of my majors during my university days. It's one of those things that I always notice. Plus the whole "anything can be better" mentality that I have. I agree though, the grammar is definitely fine for the most part, but it's my lizard brain saying "but it can still be improved." I really enjoy the game though! For not being finished, it's actually still really long, haha. Also, I actually didn't know you weren't a native English speaker!

Ah, that makes a little more sense with weeks being six days versus seven. I wasn't really confused about the timing of her pregnancy, really. It was more that it seemed she was having more periods for a month and a half or two months worth of time than would seem normal. Though, women are all different so I don't really know lol. I still really enjoy the game.

Yeah, I got the patch that has the proper titles. While I don't really care if it's incest or not, I've never been a fan of the whole "tenant/landlord" thing. Just really breaks the story for me. And haha, nah man. They're half-siblings. They are blood related. Step-siblings are only related by marriage, so no blood connection, where half-siblings have one of the same parents. In this case, for Sandra and Lucy, it's through Becca, and for Alice, it's through the MC's father. So they are all officially blood related, so it's very much true incest lol. None of the step-sibling porn that people make lol.
Yeah, I understand it's a story. Just breaks that immersion though when timelines are a bit condensed. And yeah, periods are a bit tricky. Usually every 3-4 weeks is when it starts up again. So it's not always exactly 4 weeks before it happens again on the dot, but periods are usually pretty regular unless something happens. So it's pretty crazy when Sandra is having a period like every 2 to 2.5 weeks lol

So far, I really like the game Killer7. But figured I'd give my criticisms to help make the game better.

1) I know that renders and the animation and stuff is really time consuming and such, but perhaps some different positions when they have sex? There's basically 4 different positions and that's all they do. The same for sleeping positions, they're all in the exact same pose.

2) The grammar is pretty.. Tough. For the most part, it's easily understandable but there's quite a bit that can be polished up.

3) The timing of stuff. Everything is extremely sped up it seems. Contains spoilers here *************SPOILER************ Like when Sandra gets pregnant. He's been there just 2 months, and she's already had her period twice and already was going on her third time, and then already pregnant before the third one. Not to mention it takes more than a few days to start getting pregnant and then miss your period. Usually a pregnancy test won't even pick up on possible pregnancy unless she's been pregnant for about 6-7 days already. And they literally just started trying like 3 days ago in the game.

4) There's a few places in the game where the text doesn't match up (it seemed like) or perhaps the dialogue was messed up and could use some more commas. Like one part it seemed like MC and one of the FMCs were talking about MC's father or something, and they used MC's name to refer to the father.