I like the way you switch levels, it's very smooth!
I failed when I reached the purple background level. I doubt there is really a way to get through the spider?
Other than that, I did not find any bugs.
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First of all, the startup scene is great!
As soon as I entered the game, I discovered the problem which is the character cannot shoot backwards. (He will attack himself!)
I remember that Abe provided a script to fix this problem. You can find it in Discord channel, Unity>New_mechanics, and the name is "reverseShoot.cs".
When the game over, the screen froze, and I had to refresh the web page to restart the game. Maybe you need a restart button?
Also, when the character shoots an enemy, the score in the upper right corner is zero, I think this is not what you want. But, because I also encountered the same problem, I don't know how to solve it.
Other than that, I think there are no other problems. Your character animation is great! I like the way he yells when he attacks.
Wow, this is a bit difficult! I'm not good at this kind of games. I tried a dozen times and still failed.
I think the bat does a great job. I know that the character should not touch the bat, but there is about a half chance that the character will be safe when the character touches the bat. I am not sure if this is a bug?
Since I am not able to reach the end yet, I don't know what is going on behind. Maybe you can modify the friction of the floor to make the character easier to control? (You don't need to modify it if you want to keep the difficulty of game. )
The background color is very beautiful!
I didn’t find any bugs, but it’s a bit strange when the character jumps. It feels that the character’s gravity will change when it leaves the ground (I guess it’s because of too much friction on the ground?)
This might not a problem that needs to be corrected, because it makes the role becoming difficult to controlling and it's challenging. It depends on you!
Every cloud looks the same. Maybe you can draw different shapes of clouds to make the scene look better.
The art is very distinctive! I like the long flowing hair of the character.
The purpose of lighting balls which collected along on the way is not clear enough, maybe it can show how many lighting balls was collected and representing player's score?
I like to write "end" directly in the background when player reach the end, but since the character can still be manipulated, it doesn't have the feeling of ending the game.
The color of the background and the slowly moving mountain view are great!
The color scheme of the layout is very nice.
I'm not sure if you need a restart button on every page.
Maybe you can change it to only put the reset button at the end of the story, and put the "previous page" on other pages if someone wants to review the story? Just a personal opinion.
The plot is great and the writing is very good! It's like reading a real novel!
Looking forward to more pictures and more branch endings.
The game window is a bit crowded on the web page and cannot display the complete picture, but it is fine in full screen mode.
The hand stretched over is very scary! it's great.
At the same time you put a button that asks the player whether to replay, which is also great.
Overall, I think the game may have a little content so far, but I haven't found any bugs.
Maybe you can try adding some sound effects or music.
Looking forward to you finishing this game!
Some pictures look very blurry, I'm not sure if this is deliberate or the picture is too large? Maybe make the picture smaller?
There is a page of pictures with flowers, and there is no END or game over on that page, which is a bit confusing if this is over.
Everything else is fine! The picture is great.
First of all, you even changed the colors and fonts of the website, which is awesome!
Some pictures may be so large that you have to scroll to view them.
However, the picture size is just right when viewed in full screen.
There is a bug that when the player is viewing the inventory, if they click the check again, they will be trapped in the inventory forever.
Maybe you will want to remove the footer of the inventory to avoid this problem.
I think the story is very interesting, it's like playing Minecraft in another way.
Oh my Goodness, the images really scared me. I think this is a very successful horror game!
Great animated! But the picture with blinking eyes in the window will have a flashing window picture. I'm not sure if it is a BUG or deliberate.
The game window is a bit too small when on the web.
Otherwise I think everything is fine.
The picture style is very suitable for horror games.
It would be even better if there were more terrible sound effects.
Some pictures didn't display.
It’s really great that the background changes colors through the story. When the story came to the flower field, it really surprised me!
The creatures you created are very cute. I like you to set their happiness value and satisfy them by playing games with them. Their expressions change with the happiness value, which is really amazing.
I really look forward to you being able to paint even the background, I think it will make the whole game look more harmonious and uniform.
When the game is displayed on the web page, I feel that the window size is a bit too small.
After I click "Swim across the river", there is an error in the program.
This is a very interesting story, and I like the setting of reputation. The Talking Worm caught the player's attention from the beginning and kept the player playing.
One thing you might want to change is that after the game is over, when the player presses "begin" to restart the game, reputation and health are not recalculated.
I would add (set: $reputation to 50) (set: $health to 100) in the start passage to reset the data.
Looking forward to seeing the pictures in the game!
The fonts and pictures are great! With the options in the game, I feel like really walking into a big maze The game is very interesting, and I look forward to you finishing the game!
I have not found any bugs so far.
The option of continuing to turn left and right gives the player a feeling of being trapped in a maze, and I am not even sure if I am in a circle. The protagonist not only needs to find the treasure, but also to get out of the maze alive, which is very thrilling. I think this greatly increases the fun of the game.
I played several different endings and didn't find any bugs.
The text fonts are cool and the pictures are very beautiful. The overall style of the game is very suitable for describing a story about the starry sky.
The rules are very simple and easy to understand, players only need to keep choosing different texts to reach the end.
The theme revolves around the stars and starry sky, with beautiful writing narration. The picture has its own style, it is scary and beautiful at the same time, just like the fascinating unknown universe.
I think the pictures and the beautiful narration are the most attractive parts of this game. There is not much to say about the game program itself, but I think it’s a great idea to include a gallery at footer.